I love how you have control over your words, how every word is deliberately placed, how nothing feels out of place.

I'm so in love with this! It's great!

Oh. My. God. There you go again. Ouch, my heart.

I love this so much! Just… asdfdszjdAkjash. You write so well, if I had wanted to highlight every amazing line, I would’ve quoted half the fic probably. (Having said that, I am gonna use some as an example.) Your style suited this fic in particular IMO, so well, what with the simple yet utterly poetic expressions that really, I continue to be in awe of.

One quick note about Valtor and Griffin before I dwell deeper into my absolute favorite Winx dynamic. You once again hit the nail in the head with the following line: ”She needed to believe that they could've been together if they weren't who they were.” The idea of circumstances and timing and so on impacting relationships is interesting, especially with these two.

That out of the way, first of all, thank you so much for writing Griffin with Faragonda! I love them so much, and you really managed to flesh out what little we got in the show. I loved the way you wrote Faragonda, warm and calm and so comforting - it really radiated to the reader the effect she had on Griffin (”her quiet steps the most reassuring sound Griffin could remember and her warm hand on Griffin's shoulder melting the lump of ice stuck in her throat”). And Griffin with her painfully astute, both witty and heartbreaking thoughts (”the one she wished to snap in half was out of her reach and out of her league”, ”She took a deep breath, surprised that she could still breathe after the words had left her mouth”). This was angsty yet fluffy, and it was everything I couldn’t dare hope for when I got the notification. Fan-tas-tic job, this probably became my favorite piece of yours :)

PS. Oh, and I also loved what you did with Griffin’s magic, the way you described it and had it sort of overflowing (”she was exhausted but full of negative energy that was clogging up her system”) was really clever and cool!