Reviews for Zuma
aka AddictedToFic chapter 26 . 7/10
This hit me so hard in the feels! Stories of teen summer romances always make me so emotional!

xoxo
Angela
Ashlie Christine chapter 26 . 6/3
Cute! Well done!
LiLi26 chapter 26 . 6/1
That was a great story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
xxx
kneon chapter 26 . 5/25
I seriously loved this story. it was very nostalgic. I love all your storiescan't wait for the next
kneon chapter 20 . 5/24
loves baby soft how I remember my first fragrance.

I'm lucky one of my first friends from 8th grade is still my best friend today
kneon chapter 11 . 5/23
you have the girls see Grease 5 times. I saw it 10 times in the theater with my friends then another 5 times on t.v then once on stage here in Michiganonce in London England.

my friendsI would act out the songs too.
ChristyNwonderland chapter 1 . 5/23
I really enjoyed this amazing story. It differs from most of the stories I find on fanfiction. Thank you so much for your originality and lovely story
Nikki1219 chapter 26 . 5/17
I so loved this story along with everything else you write, thank you for sharing!
tobesokissy chapter 1 . 5/17
i'll read it over and over and over. i wont get tired of your humor istg
Nikki1219 chapter 13 . 5/16
You are hilarious!
Nikki1219 chapter 4 . 5/14
EVERY reference is freaking fantastic! I'm loving this
Isao84 chapter 26 . 5/10
Aw! That was disturbingly sweet? Lol! I love how funny you are! I loved this story
Guest chapter 26 . 5/10
SO SO GOOD.

and very real. Rose dying in the 80s or I assume the 80s due to aids was very real. I appreciate that you used the current events of the time without giving it all away rly. I didnt know it was 1978. U get to just figure out the yr on ur own while they're cruising.

And Edward's character was so easy. Like..no angst or torture... just smooth sailing and failing in love. I loved that.

Thanks for this. And finally finishing ;)

Xoxo
Guest chapter 5 . 5/8
I guess I’m also confused as to why Edward would pull away from Rosalie having her hand on his leg, and would pull himself out from under her arms (last part of this chapter), but then then around and make out with her, her in his lap, for the whole movie. It seems to contradict itself
Guest chapter 18 . 5/8
Love the story. Super cute. My only question is, how long Edward and Rosalie dated is super murky? The timeline doesn’t fit with a few things. First, Bella said they had been dating for two months... then Edward said they hadn’t dated long enough to have sex. But then when we are in roses POV she is wondering if Bella’s birthday wish the year before had been Edward... which would mean that rose and Edward had been dating on Bella’s 17th birthday. And then through to the next summer.
I also don’t quite get Edward dragging rose to the movies with Bella and Jared bc he had feelings for Bella, but then just making out with rose in the back of the theater ...
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