Reviews for Shinju's Awakening
jackyfloresq2001 chapter 6 . 5/10
can't wait for the next chapter in this story
Guest chapter 6 . 2/18
Loved it hope to read more delightfulness soon or more sweet chapters :-D
Shattering chapter 1 . 2/5
Why Uzumaki Namikaze Shinju? What is the point with that convoluted name? I understand Uzumaki, and I kind of could imagine Shinju part, but I don't get Namikaze part at all. He was a great ninja, but in all honesty he was too hyped up and his last name didn't really mean much to Naruto himself.
helrio uzugaku chapter 6 . 2/3
I hope Azula gets help in this fic.

It's terribly tragic how her childhood was and even more how she turned out near the end of the series. I can see what happened to her happening to anyone who goes through life without being shown true compassion. Ursa messed up with Azula. I never understood why she seemed to favor Zuko over Azula when a mother's job is to love BOTH of her children.

This fic has a lot of mistakes to be fixed, mainly grammar, but it's still enjoyable to read because the author seems to enjoy writing it. Theres also a lot of effort. Yes there's mistakes, yes certain things could be written differently or written in a longer more detailed way.

But I'm enjoying the experience. My advice to you, is to drag certain things out a bit. Naruto needs discretion in this fic yet your throwing his true name, power and purpose around like candy. It won't take a genius for the fire lord to understand who is now free when word gets back to him about a man standing on water as if it were solid earth. Don't say he wouldn't either, because in a war, every nation has it's traitors. And for a nation as powerful as the fire nation? There are sure to be spies.
Enforcer209 chapter 6 . 2/1
Well this is probably the best Naruto/avatar crossover that I’ve read not that I’ve read many since it’s not really in my main interest in Naruto FF but most of those are when Naruto is the emperor of the west and that’s a bit over done but this is quite enjoyable. I like how you have integrated the to two different worlds by matching certain aspects of them for example the linked lineage and certain characteristics like the mental instability and thirst for power of the the Uchiha
thor94 chapter 6 . 1/31
really interesting, so naruto moves his pieces.
Arraia chapter 6 . 1/31
Perfect and update soon please
Djberneman chapter 6 . 1/31
So what happened to his clan and Uzu?
Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2019
Here let me edit a paragraph for you a little bit, it's a dialogue/conversation between two people.

Original,

As she does, she feels a sharp prick and startled she falls back on her butt again. "What?" She gets up and looks at the seal to see it absorbing the blood and burning. As soon as it's gone the man's eyes open suddenly and he sits up. "Ugh. Damnit. Why to I feel like I overslept?" It's then he notices he's not alone and he looks at the girl on the floor who seems shocked. "Uhhh hi. Sorry but you wouldn't happen to know if there is a war going on, would you?" Tylee looks at the man and frowns. "Uhhh yeah for about 100 years now." Naruto groans. "So, I did oversleep. By why didn't I wake?"

It should be like this,

As she does, she feels a sharp prick and startled she falls back on her butt again. "What?" She gets up and looks at the seal to see it absorbing the blood and burning. As soon as it's gone the man's eyes open suddenly and he sits up.

"Ugh. Damnit. Why do I feel like I overslept?" It's then he notices he's not alone and he looks at the girl on the floor who seems shocked. "Uhhh hi? Sorry, but you wouldn't happen to know if there is a war going on, would you?"

Ty Lee looks at the man and frowns. "Uhhh yeah for about 100 years now."

Naruto groans. "So, I did oversleep. But why didn't I wake?"

Make sure every characters dialogue in a different paragraph. Otherwise it's become a WALL of text, and a pain to read.
narutouzumaki9718 chapter 5 . 10/31/2019
this is a great story so far pls update soon
spirit of chaos chapter 5 . 8/7/2019
i love this keep it up
kazutoayoma chapter 5 . 8/4/2019
you really are a genious to integrate naruto in avatar like that!
but i am a little confused about the time-setting(In which season it takes place)
And can Naruto still use a Sage-Mode, because technically speaking it isnt a power but a use of Chakra in his surroundings so it couldnt have been sealed off
i hope you update soon
And i hope that Naruto will get his powers and Doujutsu back it will be interesting to see how the eye of a god will affect avatar.
Shifter chapter 5 . 8/2/2019
Great story continue as soon as possible please
XenoLucifer chapter 1 . 8/3/2019
You said it yourself, Naruto has been sleeping for 4000 years, he shouldn't remember anything that has happened back when he was young, and about Tylee, there is no way he would be capable of recognizing her as a descendant of Tenten and Lee after 4000 years, unless their children were heavily into incest and all the descendants were inbred or something.
thor94 chapter 5 . 8/2/2019
really interesting chapter.
Naruto finally met zuko and team avatar.
liked it.
Can't wait next chapter.
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