Love this story—this John is becoming the John Sheppard He was meant to be—I love the protective nature of his team and that john does actually possess a will to survive. Looking forward to more as You transform John into the John Sheppard we all love!

I am really enjoying your story. Thank you for sharing it. I hope that you will be able to post more chapters.

Good story. It seems John has finally found his place and proved himself to the others. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Pretty cool, having John show that he is entirely capable of saving himself. And anyone else that needs to be saved.

Ha! It's so weird having Sheppard take orders from McKay! Loved Sheppard taking out the Genii in the elevator. Love it when he's at his "soldierly" best, if that's a word. Good to see the team dynamics coming together! Thanks for another great chapter!

Great story! I love this alternate universe!

Thanks for the update. That was fantastic and fast pace chapter. More please.

Great chapter. Glad to see John's survival instincts are intact and the team is solidifying. Poor Kavanagh, no body loves him... with good reason. LOL

Ha ha ... really enjoyed the light bantering at the end! Loved it! Please continue! Awesome writing!

That was great. It's so nice to see you continue this story. You write action very well, and your Sheppard is very convincing. I hope you continue both of your stories to their conclusions.
Stay safe.

So good!

love your story; however, in an early sentence in this chapter Sheppard should feel he looks less conspicuous than inconspicuous with his new clothes from Ronan

Love this chapter, and still loving this story! Thank you for updating! Looking forward to your next update.

Nice! Good suspense but no unnecessary whumpage! I like it. Thanks for the update!

I was so excited when I saw this was updated, and it didnt disappoint! Please keep writing! :) also stay safe!