Loved it

I love this story so much :)

Hi! I am very grateful that you‘ ve written this wonderful, enjoyable story.
You described the characters canonically and nevertheless seemingly effortless as the perfect couple.
So well done! It all worked so well.
Thank you.

Interesting story, but still hasn’t turned me into a Snarry fan.

awesome :) i love how it's not too sweet... very nice!

This story was amazingly written. I hope you will do a sequel one day.

What happened about the fire extinguisher?

Good story, just love Harry & Sev.

I loved it. It was well written, it wasn't rushed for only being a one shot, and their relationship progressed realistically.

Lovely! Thanks for sharing!

Great story, unfolded over time which is the best way. Bring in a little more Andromeda, let the snarky quips and banter come back. Thanks for writing and sharing this story.

Lovely, the only thing I would want different would be instead of one long 'chapter' to have it broke out into chapters where you have put in the lines.