Reviews for Mahesvara's Consorts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's getting really repetitive that you've basically got the exact same scenario with every girl joining the harem with just a few minor differences in the lines. These are all basically just chapters that would at best be considered Interludes or filler, no actual plot progression as of yet. You could have done with either showing a few and saying the rest were similar or just had a few chapters with switching POV to highlight the differences but show to the reader that there were so many similarities amongst all the girls in a positive and interesting manner. |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent story so far |
![]() ![]() Im living this please uptade |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter. Really looking forward to more of the group interactions and Tatsuya returning to school. Also similar to what you did in one of the previous chapters, can you put the name of the character speaking in brackets to avoid confusion as to who is speaking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Plus Ultra"? Has Miyuki been watching those ridiculous early 21st-century animes again? The ones where such fundamental concepts as conservation of mass, momentum and energy apparently don't apply (modern magic may have come up with some clever workarounds, but in the end it still has to conform to the laws of physics). "Bad habit of acting without giving his own life much value" and "frustrated with his actions" - sounds like Fujibayashi may be channeling the spirit of Minami's late "aunt", Sakurai Honami. I also get the feeling that by the time she meets with her future daughters-in-law, Maya will have entire albums filled with embarrassing pictures of Tatsuya as a baby (a few of which may even be genuine). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bring it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter and Tatsuya you lucky bastard! |
![]() ![]() Yey! A new update! So long, so good, so worth the wait! Still love this! |
![]() ![]() Please uptade |
![]() ![]() I am quite happy you made this story. It's really odd how every character in this series has a defined character when they were only essentially mob characters, side characters, and characters to make the MCs(Tatsuya and Miyuki) look better. I felt it unfair they won't be able to get the endings they desired(Honoka's and Shizuku's unrequited love being prime examples), but you seem to have done a great job of providing that in a "Everyone should just get along and be happy damnit!" way. As an afterthought, if you ever re-read/re-watch the show, Mizuki's earlier reactions to Tatsuya seem eerily similar to a mix of Honoka and Erika combined. The adorable reactions to his views on the treatments of course 1 and 2 students, his magic not having psion emissions, etc . Before Mikihiko was introduced it wouldn't of been a stretch to say she could've been interested. But those two are cute as hell together, so I am glad you didn't involve her to be completely honest. Though, I do wish there was at least one story of them being together. Thanks for writing this marvelous fic, I eagerly await your next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sure, honesty is good. Happy April! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think 8 is a good enough number to stop. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Kyouko was added too huh? Well bring it on then! Let's go for broke and add Haruka Ono as well! Even if its clear she doesn't love him she can be made a personal servant to Tatsuya or a maid. If you think of a way to make it believable to add her as a bride then I will be impressed. |
![]() ![]() great! Kyoko deserved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update even when you're so busy. I've been looking forward to Kyouko joining the harem from the start so was quite excited to read this chapter. Hopefully we can see some quicker updates or longer chapters. |