Sorry about your first review, that was completely inappropriate of them (I would recommend deleting and reporting it, even).

Both of the pairings you used were the ones I'm fond of too narrative wise! You should consider expanding this story. This on its own works as a great end or beginning, or fluff which it is (I'm not much for smut so skipped over that and can't really comment on its quality). Some of the lines are cheesy, but for a first work in a while it's not too bad! I look forward to whatever you do next.

Could spend the next thousand lifetimes and you still would be as garbage as you've always been. Like I said, go to fucking AO3. It's the place degenerate garbage like you goes to die off and be forgotten like you deserve.