Reviews for Deserttown |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, hope college is going well for you. It's my first year and I'm so stressed all the time. Finally got to catching up on this, and I can't wait for the update, but I totally understand how busy life is becoming. You can do this! I believe our Lord Jesus gives you the strength you need. Enjoy your day, or whenever you see this!:) ~Ardhoniel |
![]() ![]() ![]() The stress level is definitely very high! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I like the new story a lot and can’t wait for more! I agree with your prediction/idea of what the yin yang ceremony and promise are like. You are such a good writer! I’m really excited for what’s next! Keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope nothing bad happens |
![]() ![]() ![]() "And I love you too, sweetie," Jay smirked. That was the best thing ever xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() An action-packed chapter, for sure! |
![]() ![]() ![]() #Godsnotdeadbuthewasalsoneverevenalive |
![]() ![]() Ooh! This is interesting! I really want to know what's on that newspaper now. I love how Nya and Pixal have their little chats in the morning. This is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() As soon as I saw the summary, I knew that this would be a great fan-fiction! I've read a few of your other stories, and I'm always blown away by how you incorporate God into them! It's super inspiring; I love your writing! Ok, to the fan-fiction! Can I just say that it would be the most-adorable thing if Zane actually asked Pixal to be his yang?! Pixane is one of the cutest ships ever! Oh-no, I really hope Pixal isn't getting her hopes high for nothing... And another oh-no - WHAT'S ON THAT NEWSPAPER?! (Great place for a cliff-hanger, but STILL!) I kinda agree with your yang theory- I always thought of it as a courtship, like a promise that they'll get married, until they're old enough. But the little ceremony to go with it is a good idea! (I'm pretty sure Cole would agree with the cake part XD) Great start so far- don't stress out about updating either! Good things come to those who wait! ;3 |