Well done, my friend.
I always love it to see my suggestive dialogues in your stories. I’m glad you changed some what includes Sophie being one of the survivors of Altlantis.
Looking forward to the part of God of War 2: Revenge.
If you need some more suggestions for that part, don’t be shy to ask

Great chapter, mate!
But I did notice you used to many question marks on some of your chapters. You should check those out and fix it. And also, Sylvia got the pearl necklace from Pandora on her 10th birthday, not her 8th.

But other then that, it was beautiful to see my made chapters for your story. Looking forward to the rest

Poor Sylvia. That she had to experience such a traumatic event, but now she’s starting to find herself and figuring to be the true her.
So beautiful that Pandora came out if her shell, and met the love of her life.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

I am curious to see Calliope raise Atreus come the Nordic era.

This was an awesome way to end the ‘Ghost of Sparta’ chapters. I especially loved how well you made the dialogues for when Calliope met the spirits of her deceased grandmother and uncle.
Looking forward to when you’re gonna publish the next chapters

Absolutely loved the chapter!

I'm curious if Calliope will encounter Nemesis, goddess of retribution and justice in the future. I know she doesn't appear in the game, but I always pictured her going after both Kratos AND Zeus for her own sake of justice. After all, in her eyes, both Kratos and Zeus are the cause of the world going to chaos.

Loved the whole chapter from beginning to end.
Looking forward to the next chapters, that I will gladly help you with

A great start of the ‘Ghost of Sparta’ chapters! It’s one thing that nearly every God of War fan has learned, never trust the Olympian Gods.
Looking forward to the next chapter, where Calliope tries to rescue her grandmother, Callisto and the revelation that her uncle, Deimos is still alive.

Wonderful! Just wonderful!

I’m so happy that the first part of the Sylvia-Pandora chapters is finally posted.
And to all who enjoyed reading this chapter, the next Sylvia-Pandora chapters will become better and better with each part

Don’t trust gods is the advice everyone should follow

Really satisfying that Calliope and Alecto are finally rid of Ares.
To everyone; the Sylvia-Pandora chapters will be awesome!

che amigo sylvia se quedara con pandora por que eso seria muy lindo pero que pasara con el personaje misterioso que mencionaste espero que pandora y sylvia esten juntos pese al futuro que le espera a pandora

Well shit more trouble for them to come. Well that is gods for you right there