WOW! Every time you get me… I’m all settled in ready for the story to get going and Bam it’s over. I guess that’s the sign of a good story pulls you in and leaves you wanting more. Ironically enough that is actually what fanfiction is all about isn’t it. LOL
Thank you for sharing your story

An interesting and well written one-shot, but oh it was heartbreaking.
I hate Ocella so much, I wish his ending had been more painful and drawn out grrr !

This was awesome. I just read your other one-shot stories on FSOG. I wish you continue though.