Oh wow, just the insane amount of alternate endings for Porcelain in chapter sixteen is awe-inspiring. I like the last one the best, with the three silhouettes and Tony making the connection between the siblings and porcelain, it fits the original story title so well. You are absolutely amazing to write and chop and edit this much crazy stuff. I have a whole new level of respect for your craft. You are a genius, Lodestar, keep writing your ELEPHANTs and building your worlds!

I would DIIIIIEEEE for a second chapter of this edited or otherwise... I'm in love with this story and if this is what you call a mess then I'm HERE to get messy

I employ the same tactic as you, except I use the word MICKEY for all the parts I don't feel like writing at that moment! It's extremely handy, because sometimes it's so hard to get the flow going, and to break out of it to find a word or research a medical issue or pick somebody's middle name is just irritating.

Interesting twist! Usually genderbend Spidey have Penny Parker as Spider-Girl... this is much better, Prynn Parker masquerading as Spider-Man, honestly a smart move both on your part and on hers... never know what predators might be lurking. Also, very well written. If you ever write more Prynn, shoot me a message please.

Damn the ending of thor dusting and loki dying made me cry
Such good writing!

I'm dead

Thank you!

Hey! It's me again!
I would in all seriousness like to see Discolored from Loki's perspective, and Thor's. Any chance of getting a sequel/extra chapters?

I have to say, I really enjoy your writing! I just recently found your stories, and have been enjoying them for sure! I especially love how you write Thor, and he was just perfect in this little one shot. This whole idea is something that has been bouncing around my head since I rewatched Ragnarok, I mean Thor got stabbed...a lot. And you wrote the scene just perfectly especially his interactions with others, and the fact that Valkyrie was highly annoyed with the fact she cared was just perfect as well!