Heartbroke

My heart [broke] (- read in italics) for Evalyn and it [shattered] again for Peter (always for Peter, tragic boy, really. Have You read J.M. Barrie's The Little White Bird?) This was a lovely read albeit only three chapters long (cough cough). I think you're a much skilled writer with [killer] prose. Thank you for putting this up.

My heart [broke] (-read in italics) for Evalyn...and then it [shattered again] for Peter (always for Peter, tragic boy, really. Have you read J.M. Barrie's The Little White Bird?)...You possess a remarkable skill in inflicting pain (lol), but it was a lovely read albeit only three chapters long (cough cough). I just have to mention again that my heart [broke]. Thank you for putting this on here! You possess incredible writing skills with killer prose.

My heart [broke] (-read in italics) for Evalyn...and then it [shattered again] for Peter (always for Peter, tragic boy, really. Have you read J.M. Barrie's The Little White Bird?)...You possess a remarkable skill in inflicting pain (lol), still it was a lovely read albeit only three chapters long (cough cough). I just have to mention again that my heart [broke]. Thank you for putting this on here! You're a pretty skilled writer with killer prose.

My heart [broke] (-read in italics) for Evalyn...and then it [shattered again] for Peter (always for Peter, tragic boy, really. Have you read J.M Barrie's The Little White Bird?)...You possess a remarkable skill in inflicting pain (lol), even so it was a lovely read albeit only three chapters long (cough cough). I just have to mention again that my heart [broke]. Thank you for putting this on here! You're a pretty skilled writer with killer prose.

Umm interesting, I’m looking forward for more chapters!

Please continue writing this ;)

OK pleeeeease don't stop writing this. I'm in love! Keep up the great work and let me hear the end of this!