| Reviews for Heroes of the Storm |
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   bennibob chapter 5 . 7/7 its abit of a cluster feck. well written and I can see what you were going for but honestly I think you added in way too much too fast. hp with added marvel and dc would of worked better. then add in mk and ac later on if you felt you needed too. but all of them at once is abit pointless. the mk peeps dont get much time to do anything except say a couple words here and there because theres just too many people. and it feels like you only added in ac so you could give harry a cool suit, which could of been done anyway, likewise with his training. also I feel like you jumped into the story too quickly. he landed and was caught up in the avengers movie straight away. would of worked out better if he had a few days/weeks to figure out where he was and practice his magic abit. now hes instantly able to do endless magic and fight on par with all these heroes with only an hour or two training when he could barely box at the start. it's just abit too rushed for my liking. may come back to it later to give it another go but not for right now |
| I don't have toilet paper chapter 1 . 7/6 Plz make him a mutant or sum don’t just give him a wooden stick and say good luck |
| fallendemon248 chapter 26 . 7/4 Oh shit is the Cult of Kosmos back? They were a pain in the ass to deal with, also is the white fox model after someone? |
| RubixJr chapter 26 . 7/4 Oh nice chapter. At first i wqs bitter because your mc is a bit emotionless but now this story is starting improve more and more. It is a bit anime like though but it is still a nice story |
| starboy454 chapter 25 . 7/4 excellent update |
| fallendemon248 chapter 25 . 6/30 Ohhhhh are we gonna get some kitana and laira and Harry fun? |
| DeathCrawler chapter 25 . 6/30 nice chapter look forward teh next one |
| nliochristou chapter 25 . 6/30 nice chapter, now the teminator has a name, also you mention mexico does that mean Rev-9 from dark fate it's also there; and speaking of AI's, witch version of Ultron will you use; the MCU version built by tony or the comic version built by hank; anyway see ya on next chapter. |
| starboy454 chapter 24 . 6/21 excellent update |
| ej-83 chapter 24 . 6/21 am i sensing some attractions n tension between fury and waller? hahaha .. |
| lokyyt chapter 23 . 6/13 more please keep typing and please reply |
| Guest chapter 23 . 6/9 This is a great story, Good quality, alright grammer. It may seem like a mess, however it makes sense and is less cramped then other crossovers i have seen. |
| starboy454 chapter 23 . 6/8 excellent update |
| DeathCrawler chapter 23 . 6/8 nice chapter look forward teh next one |
| fallendemon248 chapter 23 . 6/7 Agents of shield was a good show I cant wait to see how you'll fix them in |
