The story is actually quite good! it's enjoyable to see the various party members meet and interact, something that was very much missing from the game. At the same time they gain various motivations to remain grouped up and continue to support each other without breaking character. Like Therion. Still proud and not really wanting to interact with the others but as a thanks for saving his life he stole the map. he also recognizes that he almost died traveling alone and while he doesn't like it, allies make the journey safer.

a fun read, and I look forward to seeing you continue! but go at your own pace. while you are sharing the story, ultimately you started writing it for you. Just be sure that when you are satisfied with it, you share with the rest of us, m'kay? XD

I really like how this story is going,
I think its good how the characters are seperated in multiple groups instead of just one,
it makes their stories more focused and interesting with how they act together

Just started reading this about 3 days ago. I was a bit skeptical at first when chapter 1 was pretty much just a transcript of alfyn's start, but i decided to read a bit more and i was pleasantly surprised. I found all of the character interactions to be charming and definitely the core appeal of this fanfic. I liked the chapters 7 and 13 the most because they capture the personality of the characters perfectly while taking liberties with the game's story(ie adding original content) in a way that feels appropriate.

Overall i think this fanfic's going well and i'd like to see it keep going. I'd also like to see more original chapters, even if they make the wait for updates longer, since they're definitely the best part of the fanfic and you're able to pull off the character interactions and personalities really well

This story's been pretty great so far, please keep going

So there are two groups right now: Primrose-Olberic and Tressa-Alfyn. I'm guessing Cyrus will team-up with Ophilia and Therion with H'aanit. I'll wait for the next chapter

I like this story, please keep writing