A 30 seconds time freeze, useless? What the fuck is wrong that girl’s brain?

Did you drop this? I hope not...it's a really good story! I can see the reviews beneath this one are largely negative, though i can't seem to understand why...it's a fun story. The newer chapters are a bit confusing imo, but i think you can turn it around no problem. All in all, please update, your writing style is amazing!

I think I hate Reina. She is spineless. She acts like she does not want to be there (with those people), but lets herself be draged into different situations.

I really hope she ends up with one of them. At least kissing one of them (Kakashi or Shisui) I feel like the friendship route would fit well with Shisui, so I am hoping that she falls in love with Kakashi.

I really hope she ends up falling in love with Shisui or Kakashi.

Noticed how this fic was getting flak from reviews. I personally I think the timeskip was a little offputting but otherwise I like this fic. It has a certain measure of uniqueness in main characters personality and plot.

Tldr: timeskips are a bit all over the place but nice fic overall.

she still did not have her 'charater development' yet. nani! wow. congratulation. you actually manage to make a charater worse than sakura. still, it is a good enough to fill up my time. this story can be a lot worse so you should try to avoid that.

hmmm. she still not having her 'character development'. the second flaw she had barely solve. i did not get why a university student who saw the bigger picture of naruto world actually manage to behave like that. i dont care about her traitor mind but she actually doing her traitor behaviour very bad. she totally did not solve her second flaw yet. even now, she still worse than sakura. i hope you notice what the 'sakura' massage is. you actually manage to make your character worse than sakura. congratulation.

there is a lot of chapter 17. like 3.

reina have a really bad habit that she not noticed.
1. she barely plan anything for the future beside not interfering with the future.
2. she actually forcing herself to contradict her heart by brainwashing her mind. she told herself that other are ghost but she still did not taking action to avoid the ghost. she also stare at other so hard following her heart.
3. she did not repent from her mistake she made. she barely acknowledge her mistake.
so, she hereby announce that she more useless than sakura because sakura did not make the third mistake.
i hope the mc will get her character development so that the story get better. maybe she will realise her second mistake after losing her ghosts.

i hope she become like sakura. the mistake she make totally worse than sakura.

this story start to get wierd. i though you go for the serious and logical road but sudden come the hallucination. making the story go to humour. its barely fit with each other. i guess the stroy become a little bit cheery.

Would have been nice to have the MC having an innate special ability in the summary in addition to knowing the bare minimum of her (personality- practical minded, origin- insert). I wouldn't have read it at all.
From the summary I thought this will be about someone who wouldn't want to be a Ninja or at least would strive for getting a safer desk job; being practical minded implied a researcher or inventor, not... this.

While the idea of this ability is interesting and has many practical applcations, realistically (especially during the war) no matter what she or anyone else would try eventually she would become entangled with Danzo. Unless she has PlotArmor there is no realistic chance of her not already having been discovered & shortly later "disappeared".
There is no way Danzo wouldn't want absolute control over such an ability even at
a high cost.

3

Ok the mc bothers me. I mean if you are gonna live off grid and avoid the potential conflicts like she did, the least she could have done was sent letters or something anonymous to prevent shit. This hands off crap is not working. She was far away so its not like it affected her. Plus she could have saved someone important who could have positively affected the future. No I don't like her.