Reviews for Broken Boy
ControlyourGroupies chapter 8 . 1/18
you are that bitch when it comes to these fic! very sappy but good. i love your tua fics i have read almost all of em! i like that you didn't just say "and they lived happily ever after" you made it realistic that of course there were more slips ups yada yada. i wish you had focused more on the powers aespect like the ghosts and spirits bothering klaus but i like the way you wrote this too about him just being overwhelmed by all his truamas in general. i like that you gave ben a personality and his own issues with control and letting go. I hope in the future you write more about the rest of the team especially diego! you are a saint keeping me alive after i binged the season ! does anybody know when it's coming back?
ControlyourGroupies chapter 3 . 1/17
this is high stress...girl i am stressed just reading this. oml this man gon kill himself! i-
sarahlucylu chapter 8 . 6/24/2019
As always, a wonderful story! I'm glad we got that little bit of Ben/Klaus fluff that they so very much deserve. Such sweeties the both of them!
And hey, you're very welcome! I adore your work, I am always excited to see what you do next. :)
As far as the show goes, that would be amazing. I would love to actually see Klaus getting to grips with his powers, showing his siblings just what he can do, although I'm hoping they will show him they appreciate him a little more after his display in the theatre!
gonepostal77 chapter 7 . 6/16/2019
Been reading your UA for a couple months now. Super great. I commented under guest since I never logged in my account. I really love your klaus stories. I had an idea for a story for a few months that I hope you take an interest in writing. It about Klaus For whatever reason was away and OD. And while he was under custody and detoxing from it the authorities notice he just acting crazy (ghost and had him committed) and while he was there Klaus desperately try to convince everyone he’s not crazy but after some time he was convinced he was crazy. The ghost and his siblings and just everything in his life wasn’t real (you have to admit time travel and super powers, ghost isn’t normal) so as klaus is dealing with this new “reality” his siblings caught on klaus was committed while he got himself in trouble while away and try to rescue him. As they try to get him out Klaus now convinced his siblings are not real but hallucinations and basically his family has to convince his crazy life isn’t crazy. I just think you as an author would just nail this and poor Klaus tragedies and pain.
Virtuelle chapter 7 . 6/13/2019
It becomes very interesting ! Ben and Klaus relationship could go wrong... And that could make me cry :( , but why not, things are not always happy... Poor Ben, I support him
Next chapter pleeease, you're a very good writer
sarahlucylu chapter 7 . 6/8/2019
Wow wow wow. That was an emotional rollercoaster. Poor Ben, he just wants to do what's best for Klaus, I really hope he forgives him for this. Looking forward to the next chapter as always!
In answer to what you mentioned, I saw that interview to! Made me think a bit about what Klaus' next 'addiction' would be. I wondered if it might be to do with his powers, he knows he has potential to get stronger, that could be something he chases after vehemently, show his siblings and himself just what he can do. Could he be the next to lose a little control? It would be interesting to see.
sarahlucylu chapter 6 . 5/28/2019
Yay, I like surprises! Haha, another wonderful chapter as always!
As painful as it was, Klaus needed to hear a lot of those things from Ben, the truth hurts as they say. It might be the thing that helps him along, I'm interested in the plans Ben has though so I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter as always!
Yeah I always though that to, I mean, I know Ben could always optionally go on a ghostie walk on his own when he was with Klaus but who knows if he was there in Vietnam? I couldn't imagine what it would be like seeing your brother go through war and loss and not being able to do a thing to help. I also can't help but wonder about Klaus' power and being in a war zone. Ahh, I'm over thinking things again!
XxKlausxX chapter 6 . 5/27/2019
That was kind of a cliffhanger at the end. Glad Klaus is going to get some help but of course it won’t be that easy. I’ll be ready for the next chapter!
XxKlausxX chapter 5 . 5/25/2019
I guess I’m not really sure why Ben was upset during that scene. Maybe it reminded him of when Klaus was kidnapped and tortured by Hazel and Cha-Cha? I don’t think that’s it though, there would have to be more to it than that. Anyway I enjoyed to chapter (as always) and I’m happy Klaus is home now.
sarahlucylu chapter 5 . 5/24/2019
It's always nice to find out someone you look up to is genuine, his Twitter is rather interesting when he's posting all the backstage stuff!
This really was, I'm so glad for that little moment at the end there, and it was nice that Ben was able to be physically there for him, I can't imagine how helpless he would have felt were he still dead.
In answer to your question as to why Ben looks upset and leaves in 'The Day That Wasn't' I always thought maybe he didn't want to see his brother go through the whole ordeal. It was either that or...maybe Ben was with Klaus when he went to Vietnam? It was never explored, maybe Ben saw things he didn't want to think about and in hearing Klaus talk about it all it was all too much.
Virtuelle chapter 5 . 5/24/2019
Waw, you really like these actors (Justin and Robert) ;)
I read all your fics on this fandom and honestly, I love the way you describe Ben & Klaus relationship (Mainly because it's very close to mine I suppose ) !
About that scene in The Day That Wasn't, I really want to know your interpretations, because I still don't understand Ben's reaction ! I have only one theory : Ben is upset because, in that scene, it is the first time since his adolescence that Klaus is really trying to be sober ; He does this only for Dave, (he only knew 10 months), while he has never listened to Ben (he has always known) in 13 years of coexistence!
Ouch.
I think that instead of Ben, I would have taken it wrong...
Well, thanks you for this story, we need the next chapter

(I hope my review still understandable, I'm french and I don't speak english regularly )

Bye ! 3
sarahlucylu chapter 4 . 5/21/2019
Ben seems like such a sweetie pie! The actor himself is just as lovely, according to a friend who got to meet him at a con he's a real sweet heart!
Oof this really was an intense chapter, and that cliffhanger! I'm kinda worried what has happened to our boy Klaus, but I have quiet confidence in Ben he will help him. I hope.
XxKlausxX chapter 4 . 5/20/2019
CLIFFHANGER. Klaus deserves so much better and I hate all that he has to go through. Really can’t wait for the next update.
sarahlucylu chapter 3 . 5/17/2019
Yikes, I'm worried for Klaus! It's so hard to know what to do when someone is in a constant state of self destruction, refusing help. I love Ben's part in this though, just stop being so stubborn and let him help Klaus!
Still in love with your fics by the way.
XxKlausxX chapter 3 . 5/16/2019
DANG things are getting heated. I love Klaus and Ben’s dynamic and relationship in general though. I love whenever I see you update with a new chapter can’t wait for the next one :)
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