Reviews for Within The Shell
look2020 chapter 1 . 2/24
I liked the one-shot!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2019
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MuffledEagle22 chapter 1 . 5/23/2019
Ok whats with the birkins like creature in the tube
Eternal Violets chapter 1 . 5/21/2019
This story was so beautiful and touching,especially around the end. I truly hope the story continues,or at least Ballora gets involved,she's my favorite thank you for this story. Looking forward to future ones. Peace
Viperclaw14 chapter 1 . 5/8/2019
100/10 would read again.

really great story, I love your style of storytelling. You let the mystery simmer and get intense and then the creepy revelation appears, just great.
PonyChampion chapter 1 . 5/7/2019
Yay another fnaf Ricky and with foxy(my favorite animatronic from the series). Plus the lemon was excellent for this pairing as it seems to fit greatly with the theme.
CelfwrDderwydd chapter 1 . 5/7/2019
What a beautiful and wonderful story!

The scary parts were very creepy, and you captured that dark, foreboding and menacing air very well, but also a sense of dark mystery, and even what WAS revealed felt like only a small part of a larger puzzle.

I liked how Foxy had a strong ferocity, but also an almost childlike curiosity and innocence to her at times. When Ed showed her the outside world, it was so cute and endearing.

I thought Circus Baby and the others were just gobsmackingly scary, and they felt, at the same time, in character, but darker, and you did that great.

The fight with Ennard was scary and heartpounding, and I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. The truth of Afton and what he was doing was terrifying in and of itself, but the other parts, and things left unsaid, or inferred, they were just a scary. What were those things in the lab? Where did they come from? When? How? It makes me shiver to think.

I liked their romantic scene, and thought it was cute and tender, rather than hot and heavy, and I liked it a lot. The end was also cute.

I give this story 10/10 stars!