Reviews for Take Me Instead
Virtue01 chapter 17 . 12/17/2019
Thank you for a great and original story and for the epilogue. Hope you get to write another Maxeria story.
Virtue01 chapter 16 . 11/9/2019
Welcome back I hope America get to see her dad before he pass and her lung problem improved. I wonder if Maxon will be going with her to Carolina? Looking forward to the next update.
Anna-Mae1242 chapter 16 . 11/10/2019
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OH MY GOSH THANK YOU! YOU'RE BACK! I can't wait to see where this story goes!
Virtue01 chapter 15 . 10/28/2019
Thank you for the apology sometimes you just need to take time out and evaluate and when you get your inspiration back I know that the chapters will be great. Hope you are enjoying the marching band.
Anna-Mae1242 chapter 15 . 10/27/2019
Ah I get it, I've had similar issues, sometimes the best thing for me to get Inspired again is to just keep writing until you get to something you just really want to be writing. I'll stick around until your update comes around! good luck!
lav chapter 14 . 10/1/2019
please update! we are waiting your story is really good Please dont end it like this
Virtue01 chapter 14 . 7/26/2019
Thank you for letting us know. I support you decision 100% you always gives us you best so take the extra time to prepare the chapters. Also take time for your self and relax. Have a wonderful day.
Virtue 01 chapter 13 . 7/13/2019
Loving chapter I love the way how Maxon just talk to her as normal. I am glad he explained to her about Marlee and Carter also, about how he feels about Kriss. I do hope she gets to see her dad before he pass. Maxon care about her and her family welfare so much lovely family chapter. Thank you for the update enjoy camping looking forward to the next chapter.
Anna-Mae1242 chapter 13 . 7/13/2019
I've really enjoyed what I've read so far, the dtorys wruten well and I can't wait for more!
Guest chapter 12 . 7/9/2019
I love your fanfic, I'm waiting for the new chapter... please, don't tale too long and PLEASE, don't leave the book like that
Virtue01 chapter 12 . 7/6/2019
Love how much Maxon loves and care for America. I also liked that she was the hero in this story by taking the bullet for Maxon. Hope she the surgery goes ok. Aspen is always around to help when something goes wrong a very good friend. Thanks for the update I won’t try and kill you for the cliffhanger if you give us the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
Virtue01 chapter 11 . 6/28/2019
Yes the stitches have to be replaced one the wound opens up again. I love how Maxon always worries about her. Thanks for the update although it was short.
Virtue01 chapter 10 . 6/22/2019
Great chapter with good details as usual. Like the fact that Maxon stuck to his promise and America and Aspen are seeing one another as friends. You have captured America character so well she is a caring person to everyone even if she is not fond of them. She is very compassionate to her maids especially Lucy when she has a anxiety attack. Thank you for the regular updates and please keep being motivated I enjoy reading your story. Have a blessed day.
Virtue01 chapter 9 . 6/15/2019
Great chapter as always. I liked the way America maids look out for her, the part with Lucy is really sweet the way America made he felt ok about her back and soothe her while the other finish her hair. I loved that Maxon is so proud of America when her heard her reply to Natalie, also he made her aware that she can be friends with Aspen in the open. I am pleased that she told him how much she love him earnestly. Thank you so much for the shout out I am enjoying you story. Sorry you have not been feeling well hope you recover completely soon and thanks for the update.
Virtue01 chapter 8 . 6/7/2019
Short but nice I love that Amberly went to see America and encouraged her. Look forward to you next update. Hope school is going well.
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