I like the double timeline here, i like how shiraishi always bumped into aizawa things
I like how aizawa finally fought his love!

I lile the storyyyy

Thank you!

in the beginning i had to re-read a few paragraph to ensure it was actually 2 different situation (reality vs vision). quite confusing at first but the way you write it is good... hooked me till the end. i'm happy it didnt end with that hug at the station, aishira deserved more conversation indeed.

tho, i was not exactly able to grab that the vision is during war time to be honest. despite your hint on the newly open station and the soldier part. haha

good stuff! i hope i can read more of aishira fanfic from you.

I love you T_T I will definitely hug you if ever we meet again haha. And I’m like, we were last together...in a train! Just like most of the scenes Aizawa & Shiraishi spent together in the story. Tbh took me a while to start on this because I’m so busy and when I read the the first chapter, I knew this was a work I couldn’t rush on reading because it needs attention to detail to grasp the 2 different timelines. It was quite difficult but it works you know, how this confuses Shiraishi, it’s quite the same experience in reading. The depiction was beautiful, and yes I caught how ‘old’ the other timeline was. I personally am a sucker for time skips/time differences like you used although they usually don’t really end that well, and along with your tags, I was really scared. I’m really glad it ended that way in the present timeline. And I love how you used the post season 2 timeline! A welcomed bonus was that steamy scene. Omit it and I would still have loved the story but having it makes it even more lovable. You’ve come a long wayyyy. Was Scrubs your first story? That’s what I remember, sorry if I’m mistaken. This is just so brilliant! Thanks for writing this and I look forward to more of your ideas and writing.

T_T

so, this is my first attempt to properly talk to you. finally lol

when I finished reading all the chapters, the only thing that crossed my mind was "sasuga hayarei-san" :) before I read the ending note, I did think that Shiraishi might be experiencing deja vu, or something. so when you mentioned about it was excerpts from her previous life, I was like "I see!"

and really, Shiraishi is meant for omiai arrangement(s), but at the same time she isn't xD

such a great story! thank you for writing this!

Omg omg no, no, noooooooo

This is really good but somehow I’m scared too. I hope not

And it gets even better...

I tried the first chapter and I just want to say it’s beautiful

Please don't end the story here! I'm still not satisfied with the things are. lol. I really hope you will still write a bunch of stories about these two if it's true that you gonna end here.

this is interesting, thanks for writing this story, looking forward to the next chapter. )

kajdklasjdkslad i'm so excited to read more! i was a little bit confused though, but if i understood correctly, the part in the beginning until Aizawa's voice interrupted her, that's a dream right? I'm curious to see how that "lost memory" is associated to the current aishira, esp if that man the Shiraishi in the beginning bumped into was Aizawa keke :P