Mc is a complete idiot that tells them he knows them from another world. Don’t waste your time on this piece of trash

The phone and switch ruined this story. Don’t be an author anymore

The other two devil fruits were shit compared to the logia lol like it was a no brainer

I'm a fan of the Orchestra pirates. Please have some sort of reunion again at some point, before something unfortunate befalls them.

The base idea had potential. I like SI's and the air logia was cool but you incoporated to much real world stuff into the story. Like a phone and a Switch. Also the Avatar staff is pointless, Logias can fly with their fruit and air is definitely able to attack from long range. Also you stated in the first chapter that he would forget his memories of the story but when the pirate crew came to his island he asked if they had a log pose which he shouldn't know about. Also the God is to involved.

It was the story with good potential... Before this chapter.

Firstly your GOD is too much involved in this story. Now he talks with them. Then he gives them gifts. Then he calls Luffy the king thus taking away huge part of adventure out by informing that Luffy indeed will become king of pirates.

It's so stupid that you decided to give even more plot armor by giving them fucking GOD'S help.

I think you should've make this omnipotent being power more limited, because seems like it can perfectly easily bend laws of the universe in every world it wants, and made one more condition from it - to not disclose of its existence. It's too boring this way.

I will try to continue reading this story but this chapter is downright awful.

So you are fan of Two Steps From Hell too, glad to hear that :)

great

dude i just read all 3 of your works they are awesome more also will matt have a love intrest please do

I loved that you had Matt stop Mihawk's last attack in this one. Honestly this is the only one that I could think of that could succeed, though the Tailor could have possibly have made it more shallow. As all three continue will they diverge further from each other as the different choices available alter the paths they take? Also when the time comes do you think it would be possible to avoid the Knock-Up Stream and use Matt's Air fruit to take the Merry up to Skypeia or maybe use the Tailor Matt to use haki infused cloth and protect Merry's keel?

not too bad. though, after the Arlong clash will there be the "Clockwork island" movie/ova? looking forward to more. this will be epic. until then, later!

Lol! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Naruto’s Wind Style Rasengan, or Aang’s Air Scooter?

Good story so far but I wish the ROB would stop poping up it makes it less interesting what's the point of anything if u know that the ROB can just end your whole life.

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