I love this story and I’m definitely going to read the next part of this I am so invested. Thank you for writing

That was quiet the ending. I hope Bella's good deeds count in her favor. It will sound mean but I hope her mother doesn't fair to sell with The Resistance but I hope her dad and the Cullens survive okay.

What Carlisle did was so unexpected and shocking. I Loved it. I couldn't believe what Edward was saying with James. Bella took a big risk for her stand. Bravo girl.

This is giving me a lot of feels at the moment.

Wow!

Crying already just imagining it.

I knew it!

Ugh, Jessica gets abused :( No wonder she wears long sleeved sweaters; needs to hide her bruises?

Uh oh, hymen talk in this chapter. Earlier there was mention of a bike accident? Is there a hymen test in the future? Cringe for the society.

I love hating Jessica!

This is not what I expected. Gotta love a future dystopian society!

The story is nice, and your writing has a flow to it. Sentences are well structured and there's not much I would change.
But find it utterly unbelievable that a girl, born and raised in such society, will not have ingrained the rights and obligations of each level of the caste system. She's in constant denial of the reality of life, and to hope and/or whine is her natural attitude to everything.
And it's hard to sympathize with Bella - so many of her problems she created herself, she literally can't keep her word on even one promise, and in the end she ended up at the top without having done anything of substance.
I hope you don't take this as a negative critique, it is not intended as such.

Wow! Bella has certainly been put through the ringer with her horrible mother and sister...well the whole society she lives in. Edward for all that he has really has a bigger inferiority complex than Bella’s. Neither seem to have an easy time of it. Thank you for writing.

Excelente historia! Voy por la 2 parte, gracias x compartir tu talento!

Excellent!