Sucks that it looks like your not going to continue this story, I found it really interesting.

Hey, loving your story so far! Really looking forward to the next chapter!

You really need to break up you walls of text into smaller, cleaner paragraphs. All that your towers of Babylon do is make me scroll past to get on with it. The solid blocks are visually and psychological uncomfortable.

And where did you get “Friendship” from “Pyrrha Nikos” no parts of her name translate to friendship and they look nothing like “filía”

Please keep this story going it's really good.

Please update

This is interesting, I think that Percy and Pyrrha would make a great pairing

You're spelling Weiss wrong

OC Form:
Name: Skylar Griffin
Appearance: Dark purple, near black hair, with crimson highlights. Crimson eyes, 5'6"
Race: Faunus, cat ears & tail
Kingdom: Mistral
Age at V1-2: 17
Backstory: Abandoned as a child, Skylar ran from her orphanage at age 8. She raised herself in the wood. Despite her faunus traits, she befriended a pack of wolves, which helped her fight off Grimm attacks. She eventually enrolled in Haven Academy before going to Beacon. At Haven, she was bullied for being a faunus but she never backed down, accepting her heritage.
Personality: Highly sarcastic with violent tendencies. She's not fully trusting of humans but tries to be somewhat friendly. She's very outgoing around other faunus, however.
Weapon: Cataclysm, a black xiphos and its twin, Apocalypse, a crimson xiphos. They double as dual pistols, which is how she carries them around
Combat Specialty: She's fast and excels at close range combat.
Aura Color: Crimson red
Semblance: Illusion
Clothing: Red leather jacket, red camo pants. Black combat boots.

If possible, could she be paired with Blake?

This was a really fun chapter and got me thinking that when/if Percy goes up against Sinder that she is going to be fucked with Percy's near immunity to fire.

Can't wait to se how people are going to react to Percy and Katie cutting lose a bit with there powers when it happens.

Keep up the great work.

For all that he's called seaweed brain Percy isn't stupid. Hell if I remember right he was a general and a trainer.
How do Percy and Katie stack up physical compared to the hunters and how much will unlocking their aura boost their strength?
They both found someone quick.
So dissappinted that they decided to clean as it seems pointless as Oz was already in their side and they told the truth for the most part.
Surprised he could surprise part of his blessing as I thought most were passive

Come to think of it if they're parents still lived I'm surprised they didn't give them anything before they left.
I'm surprised Katie could push him so far,as from what I know he should be a lv or two above her physically and I thought his Archer and prediction blessing would have helped more.
Does Oz seriously believe they want to dedicate their life to protecting people after hearing their story. Is there gear enchant to return to them like riptidr

Thought Percy would have picked Pegasus wings,and that they would have been made immortal.
A little surprised Percy didn't get blessing didn't enhance his water healing abilities and that he didn't get fire go along with water ice air and earth
I was wonder if they'd get aura and semblance

Your writing style is getting better. But a few tips. One, separate dialog. One speaker, one paragraph. Other characters can still move in that paragraph, but they can’t talk till the next one. Two, watch the size of your paragraphs. The larger they are, the harder to read that they’ll be for your readers.

Awesome story. Can't wait to read more of it

I want percyxvelvet pairing

Please add more periods and separators its a wall oftext and really hard to read