Waooooo
So...Deep

I love this whole arc, especially seeing Kratos and Atreus build their relationship in a way that we don't really see much of until close to the end of the game.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

this was amazing! i would love to see more!

This is a big oof. Very well written, but not very enjoyable imma be honest. The character dynamics are way off cannon and just make Faye and Atreus unrecognizable.

Ooooo this is goood. I just finished the game and loved the unique family dynamic. There aren’t any good fanfics that use it so I’m glad there is a good one out there.

It feels mean spirited. faye as the kind hearted mother is so much better

Thanks for another great chapter, it's so beautifully detailed and well written. I loved Kratoa' inner voice here in particular. Can't wait to see the wrap up, though I could read many more chapters of this?

Your writing is just superb. I've been reading your fics and I am baffled at how so little you've been recognized. I hope you feel better soon, rest because you most definitely deserve it.

Man I can’t wait to see how this turns out!

I just wanted to say I'm loving this little series of one-shots. I just finished the game this week and was hungry for more stories of these two, and you have the universe captured so well! I can hear their voices when I read this.

This is great! Keep up the good work

Please continue

This is great! The interactions seem very natural and the story’s flow is excellent. One of the best god of war fics I’ve read