| Reviews for Undone |
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   adaren1 chapter 13 . 2/9 I love this! Hope you continue to write and update. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/10 ...where a vein of scar tissue bended away from her ear. bent |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/10 According to Wikipedia, Wakanda is the country. The capital (and only named city that I could find) is Brinim Zana. |
| Sage Nicholson chapter 6 . 1/6 So, I like your story! Interesting character piece for Bucky and Wakanda. I've seen a lot of insert-OCs. Some are annoying. Some are illogical. Charlotte is neither. Although it does bug me you say she was "the only person to ever survive a direct lightening hit", because there have actually been a lot of people who have been struck by lightning and lived. One man, Roy Cleveland Sullivan, has even survived it multiple times! |
| JustAnotherStarkFan chapter 12 . 11/4/2019 This is so cute xD! Looking froward till next update, heheh |
| Xanderseye chapter 12 . 11/1/2019 So glad you updated, love this story so far. |
| Squeegee Beckinhime chapter 11 . 10/9/2019 This chapter had me gripping my phone so tightly haha Can’t wait for the next chapter :-) |
| JrockJun chapter 10 . 8/16/2019 Great chapter! The interactions were really good, once again. (Poor Bucky. TT I love your interpretation of him.) And the whole feel of the morning and the great outdoors was very well done. I was so happy to see that you had updated~ Looking forward to the next chapter, no matter how long it takes! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/28/2019 Super cute! |
| Wonderous wonder chapter 2 . 7/8/2019 I just started reading, and so far I think this is amazing! |
| JrockJun chapter 9 . 6/12/2019 Oh my word, I loved their interaction. The tension is there, but still kind of subtle, which is great. I always get so drawn in. Great job~ I'm so looking forward to seeing how their relationship continues to grow. |
| JrockJun chapter 8 . 6/4/2019 Great job with that opening; it was so visceral. ** I really like Charlotte and Bucky's interactions and the gradual progression of their relationship. Can't wait to see where it goes! |
| JrockJun chapter 7 . 5/30/2019 This is a late review for Chapter 7, but I absolutely loved the way that you wrote it from one point of view, then the other. It dragged out the suspense, and the last bit gave us just a little more insight into what happened in the room before the chapter ended. SO intense. X_X I love emotional stories like this. Great job so far! Can't wait to see what happens! *_* |
| Squeegee Beckinhime chapter 7 . 5/29/2019 Oooooooooh. That was an intense cliffhanger. Can’t wait for the next chapter :-) |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/12/2019 This was great. Keep up the wonderful writing! |
