If Voldemort had braincells capable of anything but throwing crucios and aks this is something he could have done. Not like harry had any actual skill to oppose him with.

Very creepy. I expected a body theft of Harry by Voldemort. This was so much worse.

Nice plot twist

All I can say is: MUWAHAHAHAHAHA!

This wasn’t very good ( and I ansolutely loved your story with Harry n Hermione going all grey to do what had to be done. But this? It lacks a point. Might as well write ‘rocks fall, everyone dies, and oh btw, Voldemort was secretly still possessing Ginny, and he wins. The end.

If this had been the start of an epic story where Harry and Hermione had to run away, hiding from the new empire created in his name, (new improved 8h polyjuice?) then yeah this could have been interesting. But as it is? Eh.

Seems off that he would call her Mudblood, he's not actually bigoted, he just used it to draw pureblood recruits.

Loved reading this one shot

I really like the premise of Voldemort using Harry as a means to win, and the false security this scenario brings to the characters. Your execution was good, and it gave off some lovecraft vibes, but I do think that Voldemort's power increased too quickly - maybe a few snapshots through Hermione's eyes so that we see her terror and how things progress would be interesting.

damn you really like to make Voldemort win don't you frankly I found the concept good but the idea of Voldemort winning this way while cunning just doesn't feel believable I think it would have been more believable if it was actually Harry of his own free will no wand influence no Voldemort just Harry completely losing faith in humanity and trying to conquer it in some way to save it

Really excellent, I love all your stories. This idea was so creepy but so unique, it's fantastic. Thanks for the one shot

woooow! scary and awesome.. and great.. and wow!

terrific!

Very creepy! In an oddly badass way, lol. I love it!

This is...lovely. No lie, I wish this was a possible ending.

No. Besides this premise being a ridiculous god-mode power in a vacuum, Voldemort was constitutionally incapable of possessing Harry for more than mere moments. This is a fundamental to both their characters.

It's great to explore new angles and ideas, but this ficlet doesn't ring true at all. It would've been more believable if the Hallows had shaped Harry (and the wand may very well help explain some of canon Dumbledore's failings. (And why his spirit turned gay after Harry defeated Voldemort.))

Well, I have trouble finding this story believable. But that doesn't matter, you wrote other good stories that I like.