Just realized that you probably gave Midoriya AREOSMITH due to Narancia and Midoriya having the same voice actor

this is poopy

I'm hoping there will be no King Crimson or else this story will just works XD

Out of curiosity, will Aizawa get Moody Blues as he and Abbacchio share the same voice actor. I also LOVE Izuku's and Aoyama's friendship based on mutual posing, much to Iida's and Uraraka's despair.

Nice

Awww Izuko and Aoyamaa became friends early on. Pose buddies\(0)/. Note i'm glad you didn't kick out Mineta, it was really being a cliche in fics.

JoJo Bizarre Adventure and Akame ga kill crossover fanfic
Stand Users in the world of akame ga kill crossover fanfic

Can you add the other characters from JoJo in this story? Like weather report(if u know him) and other stand users from JoJo?

keep up the amazing work!

I CAN HARDLY WAIT TO SEE MORE!

Wait. . . Who's that Stand User with Polpo's Stand[Since Polpo wouldn't be able to move ANYWHERE]

Epic chapter, trough fights still need a bit of details more. Best of luck with all of your stories,Silent.

does Aizawa have Moody Blues

While the chapter is grammatically structured it feels slightly rushed with a bit of dialogue that doesn’t feel right and characterisation that feels uneven but it isn’t necessarily bad just unsettling but I see a lot of potential in you in becoming a pretty good writer so good luck

NOW I DEMAND AIZAWA WITH MOODY BLUES! He has Abbacchio's voice actor and he hates the whole WARUDO.

I really like the idea but your execution could be better. The main problem is the grammar, commas aren’t where they should be and you frequently forget to capitalize things. The transitions are also a little sloppy. Instead of saying2 days laterbetween scenes you should work it naturally into the paragraph by saying something like:

“Two days later he finds himself watching the sky again.”

or

“A week passes and she completely forgets about her embarrassing accident.”

If you just review the rules of commas/punctuation and fix up your transitions your writing will improve a ton! Keep up the good work!

Hello, I would like to know if you are willing to add original stands in your fic if yes
I have an idea

name of the stand (possible names, game boy, virtual boy, THE GAME, THE AVATAR)

power (controlled virtual existence (the ability to be as a game player controlled by a player)

skills derived from their power

note for a party member to use the skills assigned to them by being at the party, they must be near the stand user.

dimensional storage (allows the stand to the user and party members to store an infinity of intensity in another dimension and re-open them at any time)

save phase (allows the booth to save a location or dimension in its database, and transport itself the user and party members to this place (example the user and booth was sent to a mirrored size because of a booth or quirk of the opponent, it saves the dimension, and now it can go to that dimension whenever you want)

merging (the user's merger with the humanoid stand, allowing the user to get their human skills)

analyze (obtain a list of basic information about things around you including opponents)

player view (allows the user to view the battlefield as if it were a third-person player)

(whenever the user or his stand destroys something, or obtains a victory (whatever it may be), the stand can absorb the energy expended to do so to increase its statistics on humans (force and precision)

level up (when filling the experience bar, the user can provide a new skill or weapon to his stand, after the user has the game from where the power or weapon comes)