Reviews for Overlord Potter
DualEquinox chapter 13 . 9/26
So I have been thinking about possible targets for Harry in general and in specific on the part where Harry commented on having avenues to gain influence on the Lightside of the Wizengamot and something occured to me: Do you think it is possible for Harry to basically use the Evil Presence Potion combo to mind control Frank and Alice Longbottom back into something resembling sanity? Cause that could be a useful "in" to the light faction seeing as the Longbottoms are *porbably* involved in politics to some extent being a long pureblood line and all that.

On a simillar note, the Abbott family was probably involved in politics to some extent (Hannah's mother was killed by Death Eaters in the sixth book. While we don't know why she was killed I like to imagine/headcanon this being due to House Abbott having vocal political opposition to Voldemorts followers in the Wizengamott and because Mrs Abbott wasn't a pureblood and thus had "dirtied" the line of one of the Sacred 28) and Hannah being Susan's friend makes an opening to gain her under hsi thumb aftr which another Susan Stunning Her Aunt type of ploy isn't out of the question...

Additionally the Macmillian is a family that was comprised of 9 consecutive generations ofpure bloods and were considerd one of the Sacred 28 as well so they may have a presence in politics, especially since they would probaby be more respectable in pure-blood circles than a family such as the Weasleys, since Melania Macmillan married into the House of Black. They are also staunch supporters of Dumbledore which means if they are involved in politics, they definitly belong to his faction. Ernie Macmillian is in Harry's year and a male Hufflepuff so he could probably be gotten with a bit of planning.

The Shacklebolts are also a member of the Sacred 28, so Kingsley perhaps has some influence in politics in some shape or form. He would also be not that hard to get. Amelia, as his boss, could basically set him up.

Another useful target, though not political in nature, would be Marietta Edgecombe (if she isn't already under his control). Her mother is a Floo Network Reguator (a Ministry of Magic employee tasked with policing fireplaces suspected of being used for illegal activity). Having an insider to allow Harry to exploit gaps in monitoring if necessary would be useful.

Cho Chang's mother also works for the Ministry in some unspecified fashion. Amos Diggory works in an unspecified position in the Department for the Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures. It is also possible that the various members of th Dark Faction could possibly be able to get in contact with Fenrir Greyback, which woud be useful for starting to bring the Werewolf Packs that would have normally aligned with the Dark under Harry's banner. When Lupin shows up next year, Harry could possibly use him to do the same for the more "Light" orientated packs.

Slughorn, if he can be found or gotten through one of his contacts is a god of Networking and has so many ins with famous people that are woth exploiting. Rita Skeeter will be worthwhile picking up at some point as well - it never hurts to have a pet Journalist.

Barty Crouch Senior needs to be gotten at some point as the Head of the Department of International Magical Cooperation. Even though he is kinda incompotent Ludo Bagman should porbably also be gotten at some point if only for the influence he can exert on Harry's behalf over his department. No Idea how you would get access to her but Griselda Marchbanks is both canonicallay a Wizengamot Elder and the Governor of the Wizarding Examinations Authority.

The Ogden Family would also be worth targetting - Tiberius is a member of the Wizengamot and Bob (most probably Tiberius' son) is Head of the Magical Law Enforcement Patrol, meaning he can probably be gained through Amelia and then used to then gain his father. Rufus Scrimgeour, Head of the Auror Office could likewise be probably gained through Amelia and he is most definitely involved in politics (as is Amelia) as you don't get to be a Minister without being a politician. Mafalda Hopkirk is worth getting as she could probably cover up Wanded Magic usage for Harry if it became necessary and her department is directly under the authority of the DMLE and thus Amelia, so she is accessable.

If it can be planned properly, the fact that a heap of the Bulgarian Ministry of Magic Officials and their Minister is gonna be in the Top Box at the Quidditch World Cup is probably worth setting up an ambush for (and since Harry has Fudge under thumb he will definitely know they are gonna be there) if only so Harry can start spreading his influence internationally. Also worth noting is that Fudge, as Minister for Magic, has been shown to have unrestricted access to the Muggle Prime Minister with no gaurds etc. present as shown in the books. I'm sure controlling him would be useful.

Wow, that really turned into a bit of a tangent. Sorry about that folks, I really got into the headpsace of working out just how I would infiltrate the Ministry in Harry's place and the possible vectors to spread influence etc. It is actually kinda fun as a thought exercise tbh. Really gets you in a fun mastermind type of mindset.
DualEquinox chapter 1 . 9/26
So I have been thinking about possible targets for Harry in general and in specific on the part where Harry commented on having avenues to gain influence on the Lightside of the Wizengamot and something occured to me: Do you think it is possible for Harry to basically use the Evil Presence Potion combo to mind control Frank and Alice Longbottom back into something resembling sanity? Cause that could be a useful "in" to the light faction seeing as the Longbottoms are *porbably* involved in politics to some extent being a long pureblood line and all that.

On a simillar note, the Abbott family was probably involved in politics to some extent (Hannah's mother was killed by Death Eaters in the sixth book. While we don't know why she was killed I like to imagine/headcanon this being due to House Abbott having vocal political opposition to Voldemorts followers in the Wizengamott and because Mrs Abbott wasn't a pureblood and thus had "dirtied" the line of one of the Sacred 28) and Hannah being Susan's friend makes an opening to gain her under hsi thumb aftr which another Susan Stunning Her Aunt type of ploy isn't out of the question...

Additionally the Macmillian is a family that was comprised of 9 consecutive generations ofpure bloods and were considerd one of the Sacred 28 as well so they may have a presence in politics, especially since they would probaby be more respectable in pure-blood circles than a family such as the Weasleys, since Melania Macmillan married into the House of Black. They are also staunch supporters of Dumbledore which means if they are involved in politics, they definitly belong to his faction. Ernie Macmillian is in Harry's year and a male Hufflepuff so he could probably be gotten with a bit of planning.

The Shacklebolts are also a member of the Sacred 28, so Kingsley perhaps has some influence in politics in some shape or form. He would also be not that hard to get. Amelia, as his boss, could basically set him up.

Another useful target, though not political in nature, would be Marietta Edgecombe (if she isn't already under his control). Her mother is a Floo Network Reguator (a Ministry of Magic employee tasked with policing fireplaces suspected of being used for illegal activity). Having an insider to allow Harry to exploit gaps in monitoring if necessary would be useful.

Cho Chang's mother also works for the Ministry in some unspecified fashion. Amos Diggory works in an unspecified position in the Department for the Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures. It is also possible that the various members of th Dark Faction could possibly be able to get in contact with Fenrir Greyback, which woud be useful for starting to bring the Werewolf Packs that would have normally aligned with the Dark under Harry's banner. When Lupin shows up next year, Harry could possibly use him to do the same for the more "Light" orientated packs.

Slughorn, if he can be found or gotten through one of his contacts is a god of Networking and has so many ins with famous people that are woth exploiting. Rita Skeeter will be worthwhile picking up at some point as well - it never hurts to have a pet Journalist.

Barty Crouch Senior needs to be gotten at some point as the Head of the Department of International Magical Cooperation. Even though he is kinda incompotent Ludo Bagman should porbably also be gotten at some point if only for the influence he can exert on Harry's behalf over his department. No Idea how you would get access to her but Griselda Marchbanks is both canonicallay a Wizengamot Elder and the Governor of the Wizarding Examinations Authority.

The Ogden Family would also be worth targetting - Tiberius is a member of the Wizengamot and Bob (most probably Tiberius' son) is Head of the Magical Law Enforcement Patrol, meaning he can probably be gained through Amelia and then used to then gain his father. Rufus Scrimgeour, Head of the Auror Office could likewise be probably gained through Amelia and he is most definitely involved in politics (as is Amelia) as you don't get to be a Minister without being a politician. Mafalda Hopkirk is worth getting as she could probably cover up Wanded Magic usage for Harry if it became necessary and her department is directly under the authority of the DMLE and thus Amelia, so she is accessable.

If it can be planned properly, the fact that a heap of the Bulgarian Ministry of Magic Officials and their Minister is gonna be in the Top Box at the Quidditch World Cup is probably worth setting up an ambush for (and since Harry has Fudge under thumb he will definitely know they are gonna be there) if only so Harry can start spreading his influence internationally. Also worth noting is that Fudge, as Minister for Magic, has been shown to have unrestricted access to the Muggle Prime Minister with no gaurds etc. present as shown in the books. I'm sure controlling him would be useful.

Wow, that really turned into a bit of a tangent. Sorry about that folks, I really got into the headpsace of working out just how I would infiltrate the Ministry in Harry's place and the possible vectors to spread influence etc. It is actually kinda fun as a thought exercise tbh. Really gets you in a fun mastermind type of mindset.
dcoon chapter 13 . 8/23
Why haven’t you updated in about a month and a half. Is everything ok?
darthkratos24 chapter 2 . 7/27
Just got to the in my opinion dumb telepathy part...Why not just give him the basic overlord armour? or at least the helmet so you don't have to make up a random ass reason why gnarl suddenly talks to harry?...it's litarely built into the lore he can talk through the helmet hell Harry shouldn't be able to control shit in terms of minions because one he's not got the gauntlet which allows the use of controlling the minions and two he shouldn't even have a connect to them yet either because you've not once mentioned the tower heart which exists to choose overlords as in make them apart of evil and connect them to their minions properly also it hold their magic and protect the tower
dnivie chapter 3 . 7/24
:( the chapter made me cry so well done
Monster King chapter 13 . 7/21
Awesomeness
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 13 . 7/20
These were wonderful chapters and I honestly cannot wait to see what happens next now that you have plot coming next chapter. Furthermore...I like what you did to Romilda's mother; bitch had it coming to her.
Kevin J Rosario Cruz chapter 13 . 7/19
I havd a few questions why is Harry so passive and submisive? Cause for someone who was the Ocerlord for a few years in another body he is quite the wimp. He has done nothing Overlord like at all besides the mind control bit. Not even in the flashbacks of his time in Overworld. So as an Overlord your Harry IS a dissapointment; but as a semi dark/grey wizard i guess your Harry is "OK".
InfinityMask chapter 11 . 7/13
I’m really curious about age... if this second year(well 3 now) that means Harry, Draco is 13 Luna and Ginny 12 and because Lyra 2 year before Draco she is 11... isn’t they kinda too young to have that kind of body?

And I’m sad that Harry didn’t wait to take luna virginity... Kinda hope she would get Nightmares of her own!
InfinityMask chapter 6 . 7/13
Did you change the age of people? I’m curious because Luna shouldn’t be 14...
dcoon chapter 13 . 7/12
You wrote having flood to Malfoy Manor shouldn’t it be flooed?
Nayrcon chapter 13 . 7/12
thanks for the chapter Glow, fantastic as always.
very smut heavy chapter but you wont find me complaining as they are well done, i especially love the potential thats going to come from Tonks.
Also cant wait for your Gamer fic, that sounds like it could be fanastic.
thanks for the hard work and until next time~

Praise The Mother
flying ducks101 chapter 13 . 7/12
possession is a weird thing but in this story i can see ot beening a good fit for harry girlxgirl
Grounded Forever chapter 13 . 7/12
What the fuck is “ physical meditation” you mentioned it several times
toile grant chapter 13 . 7/12
good
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