Reviews for Hitman: Orlando - Happy Land
Teen Tyrant chapter 12 . 5/28/2019
This is a very good translation of the current iteration of games into written form. It certainly is like reading a level in the games, you nailed it on that front. I also like the contract and target details; it’s like this was an unused mission.

My only criticisms are that it’s basically just a list of what could be done, whereas the possibilities could be listed, you pick one, and post the details of how it happened. Perhaps this fic should have had a poll for each chapter so that readers could vote on their favorite scenario and then you write it out in detail? Also, the escaped could have all been put in one chapter, spread out and separated with text, condensing it down to a total of ten.

As a concept, however, very well done. If the goal was to inspire the reader to imagine seeing the different scenarios play out, you succeeded.