Reviews for Stranger
explosiveteddy chapter 8 . 9/28
What happened? I love this story. Please update more
stylo1 chapter 2 . 3/8
*sigh* if one can place information under a fidelius anything is possible. boy who lived who is that, voldemort a dark lord cant be, dumbledore the headmaster? incantation for the unforgiveables
see what i mean? the possibilities are endless and would remove all need for war
TomRiddlesTwin chapter 8 . 12/30/2019
Absolutely amazing fic! Love it!
Guest chapter 8 . 12/5/2019
Wow I just found this story and binge read it all! I love it, I don't find to many stories with Fem Harry from a darker aspect that I like but this is really good. I look forward to your next update.
Radmar chapter 8 . 11/21/2019
Fun story. Could be really good if there was more content.

One fault I can see is sudden shift in Dumbledore's opinion of Iris. She went from a "potential enemy" to "ally" awfully quick. Other than that, I have no major issues with anything.

About economy, don't worry about it too much. Rowling is notoriously bad with numbers, so making up new system is fine in my book.

I am not sure how to rate. The story is too short and didn't really go anywhere yet plot-wise, but I like almost overpowered protagonists, so that does skew my rating higher. I can't possibly give anything above 80% due to length of the story.
Raspyriel chapter 8 . 10/31/2019
There are 17 sickles in 1 galleon. So 1 G and 20 S equals 2G 3S, which is actually above 2G. Might want to review that ;)
capctr chapter 8 . 10/30/2019
So digging this story.
Mr.Heller chapter 2 . 10/19/2019
This isn't sad, she's not tragic or in any way complex, she's just the usual rebellious trash, quite boring.
gnurd chapter 8 . 10/4/2019
Really like where this is going. Can't wait to read more!
Katzeman chapter 8 . 9/30/2019
Great vigilante story so far with fun characterizations. The latest switch from murdering Death Eaters and an Elite Unspeakable team, to now being Harry's bodyguard and have friendly chats with Dumbledore felt a bit sudden though.

Looking forward where you're going with that, but it felt like a scene was missing which would have made the shift more logical.
xxxLeanniexxx chapter 8 . 9/15/2019
Awesome bodyguard Iris!
john86710 chapter 8 . 9/14/2019
Update soon its getting pretty interesting. 10 dollars an hour is very cheap for a bodyguard tho, i think you need to look at your prices a little.

JK admitted she got the conversions all wrong.
Padfootette chapter 8 . 9/11/2019
Please update
Guest chapter 8 . 8/28/2019
I will confess that rereading the last few chapters (somewhat, at least to remind me of what's going on), made me scratch my head about how Tonks knew of Iris being Archangel, then about the Order being in on it too, but I found the explanation for Tonks. Though it was surprising that Dumbledore didn't really make a fuss about letting Iris near Harry, while a chapter or two before he was forbidding the Order from confronting her.
grovepjp chapter 8 . 8/29/2019
Tx
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