Reviews for An Error in the Plan |
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![]() ![]() This is so good I can't wait to read the next part! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm, why prowl Can imagine a plan to get out with the Twin ? Or, Luka awake a little bit to Say to jazz who kidnapped Prowl and why he help ? And, the other like Optimus or Bumblebee Can help. Imagine the minibot and Sunstreaker. I know you Can create something good It's juste some ideas for you. I like to Say, i like the cliffhanger but, don't let's us sait to long, please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Luka! I'm going to murder you after I kill the guys who hurt you and took Prowl and your brother! |
![]() ![]() Can't wait to read the next part! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() Thank you ever so much! I've been craving hurt!Prowl for SO long now, I feel like I haven't read anything new and good about Prowl in months, probably closing on a year now. Also, you've written the medical part well. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear.. I wonder if Luka will agree.. poor Leighton.. And Prowl is still not doing great, good thing he has Jazz to help him out. I'd love to see Optimus' face when a human talked to him in Ratchet's voice.. :P Great chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can I laugh? Yeah? Because it's amazing. I can't wait to read the reaction of the other. And how they became like this? I'm sure you will write something interesting for that part. But, Prowl will be okay, yeah? And, will he see how Jazz loves him? Can't wait to read the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will the other Autobots be finding out what happened to their comrades soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMP! Easter fluff! |
![]() ![]() This is a nice and interesting beginning |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story so far. I am looking forward to the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job its worth continueing and you better continue it |