This was a good final chapter.

Didn’t expect Danzo of all people to be a willing prisoner. But it seems like he and Orochimaru have a plan, I wonder what will happen.

The fight between Naruto and Nowaki was good and so was the Haki awakening.

Also liked the Christmas scene with Naruto and some of the girls.

The next 2 stories sound interesting can’t wait to see what you have in mind.

Keep up the great work.

This has been such a good read. Nice that Naruto, Nowaki, and Kim were able to make amends or find closure. I can't wait to see what you'll do next time

Awesome 10/10

The thing that makes this particular chapter is, to my surprise, Sakura, and the reason for that is because Sasuke's gone, Naruto's leaving, and Kim, a member of the Haruna Clan, is leaving with him. Drifting apart is a natural process that people will eventually have to face and accept. For Sakura, her team is being divided, with Sasuke seeking power, and Naruto doing whatever he needs to continue the path he's set for himself. Sakura's the only person of Team 7, who is staying in the Village, and despite the remaining friends she has, she's pretty much all alone if you don't count Kakashi.

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Great chapter.

Liked the lemon. The elf finally got what she wanted.

I wonder if we will get a continuation of the conversation between Kim, Sakura, and Naruto?

So Nowaki and Naruto will fight now. I wonder what will happen.

I also want you to be aware that you have spelling mistakes in this chapter.

Can’t wait for the next one. Enjoy your break.

If Naruto's breathing fire, it better look like the flames Broly spews in the DBS: Broly Movie and Dragon Ball FighterZ. That stuff is lit.

Anywho, Tsunade's victory over Koharu is well done, though I recommend re-editing for spelling errors if you have time. For the conclusion of the fight, having reasons for doing what she did, she being Koharu, is understandable, and it can be seen as for the good of the village, but it's obviously done in a way that furthers conflicts with other villages and raises questions on how far others will go for the sake of the village or for those they care about, along with the risks and sacrifices. Tsunade's views, which I feel are a bit more on the building of trust, is naive but may guarantee a more peaceful outcome. As for Naruto and Nowaki's further growing powers, as shown in this chapter, they are welcoming, but make sure you use it sparingly from here on as you start adding more chapters.

Really awesome chapter overall. Can’t wait for the next one.

Awesome

Awesome. Loved the whole Coyote and Road Runner joke in the opening and not to mention Axel. But what Koharu told Tsunade about killing her all night really makes me hate her even more

Good chapter

That was awesome. Feel bad for Nowaki to discover the truth about his past. But with his friends around he can overcome it. And for Tsunade and Koharu, man talk about an epic fight. Koharu is such a prick for how she talked down to Tsunade.

Good job bro

Nowaki just took in the whole enchilada that was his backstory. Going to be a hell of a secret to tell the others. Things went full-on Telltale regarding Hiruzen, that was something I least expected. At the same time, while it's morally questionable, they are for the village. Itachi's involvement with the research facility's destruction wasn't really a surprise though.

Good chapter. A lot of secrets dropped in this. Especially Nawaki discovering the truth about himself