Kill yourself

fuck you

truly, a train wreck I can't seem to stop reading.

Will Salem try to make up for the child she lost with another one?

Oof salem lost a baby not sure if she should tell jaune maybe later years later hope the next one if there is one which i hope so goes better also jaunes family is so fucked up its actually a good thing salem is stepping in like for real also seems like jaunes gonna have all his sisters in his harem which is nice rouge raises em built to love and provide it seems.

I believe the correct term is miscarriage in this case (although she should have suspected something given the obvious signs of growth).

The introduction to this story doesn’t make much sense. I’ll read on though, you’ve written some good stuff.

that was a beautiful poem you made, oh what love you have for your father is greater than all the material things of this world, you father is watching you from the other side with all your family who have pasted on and those that wait to come here on earth. oh what joy he must have to know how much of a influence in your life for you to write such words from the heart, your father must be proud of such a wonderful son that is you, of that I can fathom just a small amount, for I am not him, but I can guess. the one thing that I hope you can get out of this review is that your father loves you no matter what and he is watching you.

just wanted to say, "YOU ROCK"I can feel the emotion from the screen

please update nice story really captivated me

AHAHAHA EVIIIIIL

Hmm, I don't know about the 'revenge' lesson there.
...It might not have been satisfying but it did teach a lesson (yet to be seen).

Down fall Der undergang

Well Make That Au Of Summer Antics Where Cinder a Racist Eventually Fall For Jaune Despite His disability?

Consider how long it takes for a person to change this will probably be a slow-burn romance

You had me worried there for a second XD Thought that Tyrian and The old lady were going behind their masters backs in having the two Arc sisters be set up to kill one another.

Read all of this in a few days. Great writing, although the story progression is very slow and I'll admit. I find the parts with the sisters from the middle chapters relatively boring. The payoff on the set ups was nice, but in my opinion you took just a little too long with them. Still, what's done is done, and the story is finally shifting back to more Jaune. Looking forward to the next chapter!