This is by far the most detailed sex book I have read so far and I enjoyed all of it! And I understand how Lucy feels as a virgin because same here I have 0 sexual experience and the information is wow I have no words other than that it is amazing

I absolutely loved this story, it got be addicted! Nalu is perfect together and the last chapter was worth the wait. 3

man could really feel like I was there. Hot and steamy

I'm glad i read this story. Its absolutely mind blowing. Deffinitely smoking hot!

Sorry, I accidentally pressed send button on previous comment but it was incomplete. As I was saying I feel that the last chapter broke the rhythm of the story. From first chapter till chapter 14th everything flowed smoothly. But in the last chapter, I think you over rationalized the things. First, whole unclean bits thoughts by Lucy. Complete turn off. Then the bunny kick to the face. I had to stop there. Because it felt more unconsensual than making love, which they were actually doing. Anyways, other than last chapter, the whole story is awesome.

I really liked your story. Your take on whole "mate" thing is amazing. However, I didn't quite liked the last chapter. For some reason it kind of broke the rhythm of the story.

you know I dont think I have ever read a story twice. this is the first time I have. i love you writing u put so much detail in you work and you make my get so engrossed in it its amazing keep write because your one hell of a writer

..THIS IS PERFECT! PLEASE, CONTINUE AND DO MORE NALU STORIES!

If you're taking requests/suggestions, I got an idea for a Nalu (even a Gale/Gajeevy) story:

All the Male Dragon Slayers are going through heat (Dragon Mating Season) and are ready to mate. However, the Alpha of the group has to start it off before the others could (That being Laxus; all the Dragon Slayers formed a pact with each other, becoming a family group of their own from how few they are [Wendy is their baby/little sister, but is too young for Mating Season]). He starts off by scent-marking his mate (...Honestly, I think he and Mira make a cute couple), before he takes her to his den, while releasing a pheromone that the other males picked up and went to look for their mates (They find it to be the appropriate time to claim their mates and start families of their own [They want to become fathers and desire to have their mates pregnant with their babies/hatchlings.]).

While the females, not Dragon Slayers, are effected by their mates' pheromones (lightheadedness, fever-like symptoms), which helps their bodies to relax and increase the chances at becoming pregnant. So, the males will keep mating/rutting with their mates, until they end up pregnant... And yes, the Male Dragon Slayers have knots.

I really read this in less than 24 hours. Amazing story and writing! Thank you for sharing your story with us!

i am so hurt for you write so well. i thought if natsu actually did end up r*ping her i would have to backtrack, bu t you wrote it in such a way that i just felt hurt for him

oh my godddd my heart is breaking

ya know... i wish lucy would question at least WHY he chose her as his mate... i am so sad for both of them

I loved this story! Last chapter was steamyyyyy. The detail you put into the chapters is amazing.

What’s going to happen next...

I’m so anxious, what’s going to happen next