What a way to kick things off! So far it's quite clear and simple to follow Jules' perspective. Interestingly enough, it's also trippy at the same time, lol. This chapter in particular. Perhaps it's a coincidence, but I'm getting NieR: Automata vibes from this.

Also I like how well you describe the surroundings and generally narrate! Paints a vivid picture for me to imagine, plus Jules' thinking patterns sure seems interesting.

I've read the AO3 version, though I hope you don't mind having a review here instead. Do keep up the good work! I look forward to the next update :)