Reviews for What Could Have Been |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love the fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yugao bullying him into decorating his own house in a way he doesn't like. Naruto should get bloody revenge on her when he gets more powerful |
![]() ![]() So far, I am enjoying the story immensely. And based on characters indicated in the description, I'm going to love it even more soon. My only hope is that you don't abandon it...And that it doesn't turn into romance with little plot, but that's unlikely from what I've seen so far xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve been waiting for this chapter for a while! Are you going to do pairings? I wouldn’t mind Naruhina! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for Naruto to meet Hinata and the others! I'm happy he met the clan heirs! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! I enjoy this spin on the story because personally that’s how it should have been. Are you going to timeskip to the academy and make Naruto a Genius while everyone else is left shocked or are you going to continue this for a while? My only complain( personal) is that I wished the chapters were longer. Can’t wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Great chapter, really liked Hiruzen and how he handled Danzo, also can't wait to see what you plan on doing with the Uchiha's, update soon please xD |
![]() ![]() Nice chapter, really liked Hiruzen's characterization in this one. Waiting eagerly for the next update. |
![]() ![]() Looks good so far, and the premise seems interesting. Keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job on the story,please update as soon as you can thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If Hiruzen allowed Danzo to amass an organization that could compete with the thousands of shinobi Konoha has (no way they could have supplied the numbers they did during the 4th war and not have had thousands after Kyuubi incident) then he is grossly incompetent and no one should listen to what he says. Fearing a Civil war but claiming he can have Danzo killed is... frankly silly. It just sounds like a justification for you to keep Danzo around and not solid in-story reasoning. Jiraiya should kidnap Naruto and leave him with the toads if Hiruzen is that incompetent (and keep in mind this would be during a time Orochimaru believes Hiruzen could still kill him) Hiruzen at his death was the strongest Kage so why make him stupid here? And why make everyone else stupid enough to follow his stupidity? |
![]() ![]() mystery gift giver is jiraiya with gama-chan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome job with this chapter! It's very good! |
![]() ![]() the premise looks interesting, waiting for an update. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This really spectacular! Keep it up! |