Reviews for Moments in Between
PiratePirata chapter 22 . 8/5
You might have realized, but I love this series. I still haven't finished TRR book 3, so im not gonna read the rest until i finish it. I'll see this story again when i finish the choices book! Probably won't be back in a few months or the start of 2021.
V4l3r14 chapter 30 . 7/28
Omg thank you so much for writing this story! I love the app and I love your work!
PiratePirata chapter 12 . 7/27
I'm just reading everyone having their first kiss and I'm just here, an almost 20-year old that never had her first kiss yet.
PiratePirata chapter 5 . 7/17
I realized reading this story is dangerous. I'm almost done with TRR3 but I'm not done yet. I feel as if I'll catch up with this story before I finish book 3. Would be... different to be spoiled by a fanfiction.
PiratePirata chapter 2 . 7/12
I have only read 2 chapters so far but i already really love Milla. She's really interesting. Maybe I like her so much bc TRR MC is one of my favorite.

For one scene this thought went through my head.
"in that case... im going with you!"
Me: Millie, I hope you have some diamonds on hand. (yes i said Millie then, and idk if the scene with Liam happens in the first book but if it was it would have been a diamond choice anyways)
ladylibre chapter 29 . 7/3
This was such a poignant chapter in Book3. What makes it one of your favorites? Just curious.

Thanks again for writing! Glad you’re feeling okay and made it through the wilds of June :-)
Nikolettjay chapter 29 . 7/3
Woooo! An update, I've been waiting and hoping for this since I caught up on your story! I've loved every moment, each chapter. I have to say it's by far my favourite of all the Drake centred TRR fanfics I've read, and there are some great ones out there. You've written their relationship so beautifully, it's deep and realistic and imperfect but also perfect at the same time... Okay, I gushing and that probably didn't even make sense I don't care I love it ... PLEASE don't stop this story!
Nikolettjay chapter 20 . 6/12
These last several chapters have given be every emotion possible, so many great little moments that make the relationships between the characters so darn real . I love this story, so much. You've done an amazing job of authentically covering Drake's perspective, you've breathed so much more life into him and also all of the other characters. I don't know how far you're going to take it but I'm going certainly to continue reading. You're a great writer :)
Nikolettjay chapter 16 . 6/12
Gorgeous! I loved this chapter and love THEM! Their bond is so real, I love how you've given them quiet intimate couple moments, there's trust, communication between them, and even spats. They are so darn real and lovable. Reading this make me both smile and laugh.
Nikolettjay chapter 14 . 6/3
The conversation between Milla/Drake and Savannah is so darn adorable! How did you come up for the address for her apartment, does it come from somewhere or is it just random?
Oh and Drake has some seriously strong self control! haha ;)
Nikolettjay chapter 11 . 6/3
Beautiful chapter, thank you for including this! It makes them more believable and real as a couple to see them sharing moments like this, and...I love them! :)
Nikolettjay chapter 9 . 5/31
"If I go back inside. I'm not coming back"
No! That didn't break me at all! :(
That was beautifully done. I like Bastian here too, this and also his earlier exchanges with Drake. He knows what's about to happen and is duty bound to keep it in. But he dose still care though, you can see it.
Nikolettjay chapter 8 . 5/31
That exchange between Drake and Milla needed to happen. It's emotional but real, everything I'm reading here so far so much more realistic and fleshed out... Is it bad that I think I'm starting to like this better than the original?
Nikolettjay chapter 7 . 5/31
"It's you! You're the guy!"
I really love that moment. Of course people are going to notice, and I enjoyed reading that exchange between them. I also love seeing her horseback confession to Maxwell from Drake's point of view too. As far as I'm concerned this is all canon now.
Nikolettjay chapter 5 . 5/31
I love the conversation with Liam and Drake over the change in Milla, it's things like this we don't get from the game. Even without the diamond choices the MC is still somewhat flirty and encouraging towards Liam and that bothers me so it's nice to see that rectified :).
I don't want to sound ungrateful and I'm sure the game creators have done their best but it seems no matter who you choose it makes very little difference to the overall story/dialogue.
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