Cant wait for the next chapter to come out soon.

I'm so happy to read this. I can't wait for the next. It's good to see you again

So there's no hope to read more?

I'm waiting for read more

cant wait for the next chapter hope it comes out soon.

I'm waiting... Please

I hope that the next chapter comes out soon see you soon.

Good job! I stumbled across your review and I popped by to see how you were doing. I guess I shouldn't have been worried; this is absolutely wonderful, capturing the feelings very well, and I love it!
I also do look forward to talking to you again, it has been a long time.

Ok fine I'll wait. Bye

I love this story so much keep up the good work!

Good, finally Dusk admits to be in love with Sunny. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Who is that Dusk has to meet? Can you write a chapter with Dusk and Sunny in a romantic flight like Toothless and Light Fury, please? Update soon

When there's fanfiction about fanfiction, you know things have gotten a little out of hand.

Nice title, nice title, but why are the paragraphs arranged that way at the beginning of the chapter?

Dragons have video games now? And cars?

So, this contains a portion of some copyrighted material. You cannot publish words that are not your own. Not only does that go against the Rules & Guidelines of this site that we all have to agree to before we can go publishing stories, but it could also be considered plagiarism. Since this is a portion of the book that people would already be familiar with, you could just call it "The Prophecy" or find some other way to avoid actually copy/pasting parts of the book to keep your story in the clear. Keep these suggestions in mind, as they can help you avoid issues with the rules in the future.

Best,
Zad
Critics United

You cannot copy the prophecy directly from the book. Please consider writing an alternate version or remove it.