Reviews for Heavy Lifting |
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![]() ![]() Needs more. Very funny |
![]() ![]() ![]() Trying to clean up open things on my iPad and it appears I never reviewed this. Equal parts funny and horrifying. I honestly can’t picture Beckett with jowls, but I’m trying! I hope we can get everything resolved and Kate on Weight Watchers! Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, my God. Did you ever punk me with the resized engagement ring. This is too funny. Kudos on the deception. Just shows how our innate prejudice plays into our (my) reading of a story. Onwards to Ch 2. Liv |
![]() ![]() ![]() Howling. Oh my fucking margarita pizza, I can’t even imagine her heavy. I can’t. This reminds me of Shallow Hal, even though I saw only about 10 mins of it. I have no idea where you’re going with this, but I have a first class ticket. |
![]() ![]() Funny and touching, great start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very funny, I thought she was pregnant at first. I love your stories. I can’t wait to read the next chapter. Great job! |
![]() ![]() "what's cooking ?" hahaha ! boy, is she in to her triple chin ! Loved this... definitely very AU, and very off-the-wall, indeed, but great fun ! Thank you |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Now that's creative writing... Looking forward to the rest of the story! |
![]() ![]() I have no idea what I just read. This is weird and fantastic at the same time, so I really want to know what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great first chapter and dam Beckett is pissed i understand why great job and I can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() HEY, WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED. ARE WE IN AN ALTERNATE UNIVERSE? I've been unable to sit and read for a few days. I read another fic and it was so far out of the norm that I started wondering if I have developed dementia. I'm so confused. If you remember Moonstruck, I'm the elderly grandpa who says "someone tell a joke". That's how I feel. Besides, that damn Castle episode was a mess anyway. Couldn't one of those high paid writers come up with a reasonable theory, shoot they could have called the X-Files folks, shoot. Now I'm rambling. I'm going for a walk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG ! Kate who weighs 100 kg... I had to read this chapter twice...I thought it was translation errors... but no! What horror...at last...wait for the continuation ! Maybe a dream ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funny. Skewed. Way out of the ball park. Willing to plow on with the next chapter while I munch my way through a bag of chips. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! LOL! I can't wait to read what happens next! |