Reviews for The New Monster part 2
Echo.rex chapter 2 . 2/9
Awesome story,i cant wait to read the next chapter and im practicing animation so i might make a music video for Owen and Dakota,if you dont mind,ill make sure it is clear it is your story
Good luck and best if wishes
CanzetYote chapter 2 . 9/26/2019
I have some questions about this scene:

"Owen looked down knowing what she was trying to say to him, he felt tears escape and slip down his snout."

1. When Owen was crying, did his tears specifically slip down:
A: The bridge of his snout and off the tip of his nose as he hung his head
or
B: The side of his snout diagonally and onto his lower jaw

2. Exactly how would Owen react and what would he say to me if I licked those tears slipping down his snout with my tongue and hugged him? Because every time I read that scene, I fantasize licking every last tear from Owen's snout.

3. On a scale of 1 to 10 with 10 being the saltiest, exactly how salty would Owen's tears taste on my tongue if I licked them directly from his snout?

4. On a scale from 1 to 10 with 1 being frozen and 10 being scalding hot, how warm were those tears slipping down Owen's snout?

I know these questions sound weird but please please PLEASE reply back!
narutouzumaki9718 chapter 2 . 9/19/2019
I kinda hate that he is forced to pick blue or Claire
Guest chapter 2 . 7/18/2019
I love this... I was writing a story similar to this and I decided to look and see what was already written and I have to say I am very impressed... I really hope you update soon I am dying from excitement... anyway keep up the amazing work please
Guest chapter 2 . 4/15/2019
Great
Guest chapter 2 . 4/10/2019
Nice job i really like the story keep it up