| Reviews for rescued from the Dursleys |
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   blushingpixie chapter 11 . 6/16 Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter |
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/10 Can you update? |
| HufflepuffGirlUk chapter 11 . 6/5 this was such a good story but it makes me want to know more! |
| steve.moore.9081323 chapter 11 . 3/27 Please more |
| steve.moore.9081323 chapter 1 . 3/27 Please more please |
| steve.moore.9081323 chapter 1 . 3/27 Great beginning |
| Truthweaver chapter 2 . 9/8/2019 Author? are you seriously calling Arthur Author? Is that autocorrect on your phone or somethst? Also Harry's openness and Ginny's understanding of his situation are completely unrealistic and unbelievable. In general everything feels shallow and emotions are only described in terms of the characters' physical reactions, and even then not in an in-depth way. It would help if you would actually spent some time writing what the characters are thinking and feeling instead of just describing everything as if you were just observing. |
| Millie072 chapter 10 . 6/15/2019 This new format is bloody marvelous! Had stopped reading story as getting unbelievable and too difficult to concentrate on due to the large block of words without paragraph definitions. If you do reformat from the beginning, you'll likely pick up a lot more readers, especially the Ginny/Harry fans. You may wish to correct your summary with punctuation. Proper Names always capitalized. |
| Sparhawk537 chapter 10 . 6/15/2019 Hehe very nice! |
| Fast Frank chapter 9 . 5/26/2019 This is basically a good story, but it's just unreadable as formatted. |
| Fast Frank chapter 3 . 5/26/2019 Vernon refused to touch gold and silver coins? That's some serious paranoia. |
| Fast Frank chapter 2 . 5/26/2019 Technical criticism: Break up run on paragraphs for easier reading. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/14/2019 Take your time |
| arcticfox99 chapter 8 . 5/14/2019 need some ideas? |
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/22/2019 Well, I peeked at your fic and now it seems like the huge paragraphs have only gotten longer out of spite. It really is too bad as I was interested in reading this fic. I'm glad you improved your grammar, but I still think you should open your copy of Harry Potter and try to do the same formatting as the books. This story is unreadable with the huge chunk of texts. I understand editing a fic can be annoying, but if you formatted it into something that was easier to read from the beginning then you wouldn't spend a bunch of time editing it. I don't understand the stubborness on the paragraphs. Don't you want as many people as possible to enjoy your story? You are probably turning a lot of people away from your story since not everyone is willing to wade through a giant wall of text. Anyway, I suggest you get a beta who could edit your chapters into a better format since you don't seem interested in doing it yourself. |
