let me know when the rewrite is up

I'm interested to see how it goes. Keep it up.

Hope to see luna in human form as a romanticized choice as persona 5 can choose a girl to date

So when do the scouts finally interact with the phantom thieves?

Excited to see what happens next.

nice job on this chapter

hmm this has potential let's see where this goes

I hope you continue, this is quite interesting.

*Whistles*
Ren emoting. And Ma caring. And Igor is actually here. Yay

I am glad somebody wrote Ren with more emotions about his situation.

I forgot I added this story also I like how your given him real emotions I mean the game is good and all but he's more of a Blank Slate in that here you had him act like any other person would in his situation so good work and I can't wait see what you do next.

Woo and here I thought it was dead. Nice start I can't wait to see how you mix the two worlds.

This seems like it'll be a good story. I hope to see more soon.

This is pretty unique. I'm curious where you go with this.

I did some start though I hope you do mix it up a little bit and not just follow the game all the way through and stuff and I hope your chapters are a little bit longer good luck mate I can't wait to see what you do next.