I can understand and respect the difficulty that comes with writing. If you continue the story, I for one would be pleased.

The writing in this book is a bit more forced than its predecessor, but that might be with the larger breaks, and trying to get the ball rolling with the story. Not bad by any means, just a touch noticeable.

With Halo Infinity coming out, Perhaps a reinvigoration of interest?

I still enjoy this story although It is kinda just on rails most of the time. I'm more curious as to the crew interacting with Jorge now that they know he's from another universe.

10/10

Writing is hella hard, but it can be exceedingly fruitful and satisfying to know that there are people out there who treasure your works.

Which in my case, your Halo/Mass Effect series is for me. That being said, this was well done!

Good Chapter keep up the good work!

P.S. Am I the only one who sees 'J. Garson' in the Characters tags instead of 'Fem Shepard'?

Will Zaeed and Kasumi make an appearance!? Can’t wait to see Tali’s reaction to laying her eyes on Jorge’s armor!

Great chapter!

Glad to see more of this! :)

Please update again soon please! :D

I hope with all my heart that this does indeed kick you out of your self given stupor and that you give us more, because writer or not, your writing is extraordinary, and really enjoyable in the midst of this pandemic. Please, keep the spark alight! You can pull this off!

Great job as always. Hope to get updates soon!

Thanks for the chapter.

Really enjoyed how Shepared was smart enough o get her heavy fighter to accompany her to Grunt. A nice change in the origional series as anyone else would have to use guns to put down a Krogan and be a struggle to immobilize them. So it makes sense Jorge was used.

Loved the part Jorge called Miranda's outfit of body armor a cat suit. While Jorge wears a skin tight suit under his spartan armor, that is all it is. A suit to make the armor more comfortable but not the thing you would want to wear by itself on a battlefield. Its like she is expecting to fight a bunch of men who can't keep their eyes from wandering. Good luck with that trick against members of a different species.

Cannot blame you for losing drive in Halo and Mass Effect. Both series have not had the best track record with Halo 5: Guardians and Mass Effect: Andromeda. As for how to recreate that spark, maybe we can get a scene where Miranda during her interrogation, tries to distract Jorge but the Spartan knows how to keep his cool and stay focused. It would be kind of funny for the flawless Miranda to not get everything she wants.

Writing is hard, yes, but I really like your writing. So please do more!

We will certainly be cheering you on, your writing is always a pleasure to read. Good luck overcoming the slump!

True. Writing is hard. Especially if you can't form the words to the actions you have played out in your mind.

Yeah, writing is tough, glad to see you're giving it a good try! I hope you manage to get your stride started again!

Never did I expect this story to come back again. Thank the protheans and the forerunners that it is though.

About your problems with wiring, you're not alone on that. I guess that's just the way it is for us fanfic writers. Still, glad you're back in the game.

I really hope you continue to write, I love this story!