I read death by snu snu it was Well Written.

have you how about making a Story about Taiyang

Basically A Story where Tai is More Active Role in Beacon and Winter finds him attractive because He is Family Man.. he is completely opposite of her father.

1: Yang Will Lose Her arm Because Cinder was About To Cut Down Phyraa pushed her out of The way.

2: Taiyang will travel with Yang to look for Ruby.

3: Adam is not a poorly Written.. a matter of fact he ends up betraying Cinder at last moment and Fight The hacked Atlas paladins and Grimms for the public to see the white thing the more heroic light and to make Atlas Look Bad

4: Adam cares about equality. he knows that if the White Fang participated in attacking Beacon he Knows Their will be retaliation and be seen as an Act of War.. He only pretended to go along with Cinder's Plan and he

5: Adam is A Mentor to Blake. Not a Lovers. That is dumb. Monty oum wanted Adam to be a Mentor to blake.

6: The White Fang Do not Kill deserters or people who want to leave the White Fang. killing the people that want to leave does not make them a sympathetic organization.. that would only encourage any would-be deserter i giving away as much information as they can considering that white fang already show no mercy. The policy of Killing deserters Will make The Faunus Community reject the White Fang for being so cruel and Extreme

Is anyone wondering where Zwei is though? I mean, he could’ve died ages ago, since vampires would obviously outlive them. But sometimes I wonder if the howl Jaune and Ruby heard was Zwei. Or if he was a werewolf... lol nah.

Other than that, I still don’t like that Ruby has to share Jaune. But Yang seems like she’s only teasing Jaune for Ruby to claim him and realise her true feelings toward him. Glad Jaune’s sister also approves

This story is always great. I love chuuni vamp!Ruby with Jaune. It's just fantastic. Especially combined with mutual idiots in love without realizing it. And older blonde sisters picking on them for it. Just great.
And damn, Yang horny XD
That line "I don't know what the means, but damn I'm hot," was just perfect.

The two are wonderful together...but I have to wonder how Beacon is going to complicate things. I guess I'll find out in upcoming chapters.

An absolutely adorkable start.

I was having a stroke when you said 60 degree temperature, like, I can cook an egg on the dash of my car when its 40 degree celsius, 60? In a hotel room? Localised entirely within my fanfiction? Would probs be on fire...

But then it occured to me that your using fahrenheit. And all was good.

This story warms my heart makes me smile

Adorable as always
Also yang using her power for the best reason, to make someone forget you were flirting with them when it doesn’t work out

Might want to do some quality control here, some characters names are placed when it is obviously meant to be another person. Such as Yang being mentioned when it should be Jaune.

Other then that, good fun. Not sure how I feel about yang coming on so hard on Saphron, but so far you have yet to draw the line she has between joking and actual flirtation. I will hold Judgment until then.

Hope youre doing fine. Tough couple of months for all of us world wide.

Thank you!

La mejor historia siempre. Espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo muchas gracias.

update is here

this is my favorite of your stories.

Ohh looks like Ruby's going to learn how to unlock more vampire powers! I really love this story, I find it light and fun with just that little bit of dark undertone every once in awhile. Thank you for putting it out there!

So...Yang's gay or something?
...Why?