Super cute!

OH MY GOD. I just binge read your entire story. Wow wow wow, it had everything I wanted in a story, and more! You’re a wonderful writer! Thank you so much for writing such a captivating, dramatic, sad, endearing, everything story!

Wow! You are an outstanding writer, from beginning to end I was wholly captivated. You balanced love, drama, action, sex, violence, and emotion so well. You had a BOSS ASS BITCH BAWLING when Sasuke said I love you to her. My heart is still aching. Please never stop writing, you are outstanding and your work is brilliant. Thank you for this masterpiece!

Oh wow I really didn’t expect things to end up this way.. I cried so much I feel so bad for what they all went through. I’m glad Sakura didn’t die though, I was really worried for a second there. I’m excited to read the epilogue!

Holy moly! That's was freaking amazing! You made me cry and laugh. To be honest this is better than a lot of novels I have read. Damn good job!
Keep up the good work. Cant wait for the next one.

I can imagine Sasuke after he returns to confess to Sakura, and she’s like “Guess what Sasuke? I married Kakashi!”

My daughter is silently judging my reading material, I can tell. Why is my 5-year-old so judgmental?

im crying. i am so full of emotion. i love the relationship between kakashi and sakura- i love how they adore each other, how sakura is worshiped by kakashi. i love the beautiful imagery of sakura blazing in battle, of chakra, of the whole thing. I can hardly breath i am so in awe of this story. i am so excited for the epilogue. This has to be one of my all time favorite stories ever. It truly tops most any other literature I've read, but this is top three (Top two? It might be my favorite ever). I cannot praise this story enough- your writing is exactly what i have been trying to achive. There's a certain balancing of wish fulfillment, angst, resolution, and grander that is truly unique. Again, im in love with this story.

She just woke up from a coma, now they didn’t waste time getting to kissing. I sure hope she brushed her teeth lol and a hospital sponge bath and a diaper? I think I would’ve taken a very long and hot (hot like the fires of hell) shower.

I dislike the portrayal of Hinata being pathetic at only 4 months pregnant. Some people don’t even know they’re pregnant at that time. Typically a well defined and worked body might not show signs of pregnancy right away, as such the case for shinobi. The way you reference her body makes it seem like months have past since her last chapter appearance, instead of it only being a few days. Was there some indication that her pregnancy was absolutely high risk?

Everything is great so far, my only complaint is the lack of borders. Breaks between time and point of views is a must. Without them, you continue in without clear distinction of what is going on. A few occasions I had to reread a section to reorient myself. Anything would do, a simpleorin the space between would be enough indication, if you don’t want to put a full line through.

Best chapter ever!

you are soooooo mean for end it like that! oh well cant wait for the next one

Love it!

I was on pins and needles worrying about Kakashi. Now I’m hoping that Naruto and Hinata’s baby will make it and that they can forgive Sakura for hurting Hinata. I know they will understand that she couldn’t control what was happening, but understanding and accepting are two different things. I am looking forward to the next chapter!