Harry Potter, Hobbit, etc. So she basically got yeeted to the past. Nice.

Awwww :) I think it is sweet how he doesn't want to steal her warmth - and the promise they made about keeping one cool and the other warm depending on the seasons :)

Love the sound of the wedding and everything about it :) So beautiful and so simple :) Loved the story so much too :)

Annotiette?
Did you mean Antoinette?
And I didn't think Margaret was a French name...
Marguerite, on the other hand...
Oh, and Nadir's last name is Khan, not Kahn.
Other than that, very interesting story, although I'm still waiting to see why the first part of Chapter 1 is apparently set about 150 years after the rest of the fic?

The feeling of finishing a book is definitely rewardind, I’ve done it once and it felt great. I think you did a wonderful job with this story, despite all your changes. I was writing a story and deleting the whole thing more than once (feels like five times) just to make it better. So I understand the struggle with coming up with a plot that fits both the characters, background and plot. Great job!

Really good very interesting sweet and some drama lots of emotions and a happy end my favorite thing them ending up together. I like your Christine she is interesting and smart not so naive and mature she should be after your age revelation that thing with Erik makes sense too In the regard of the magic being confused because of him still unborn. Both ideas sound nice and interesting even when one of then won't end happy for Erik.

Wow!
Just finished this pretty great story!
Side note- you put Meg was marrying Adam in this last chapter (23) and it should be her beau, Victor.
I love time travel stories and this was a pretty great one. After reading all of your postscript information that didn’t get into the story, I really wish that you worked in that Erik’s deformity is from the magic metal being activated while his mother was pregnant! That’s really important, and such an amazing insight.
I mostly understood the whole Gustave arc, but it can be understandable that some were confused. It was great that he went to find young Christine to finish the loop, and that’s why him sending her to the past finally makes sense.
Honestly, I originally thought Erik and Christine would go to the future to start over. After the world wars and all kinds of disease, Erik’s face would still be considered awful, but there’d be more understanding, or even a chance to ameliorate his state of living. (And it would’ve been another closed circle from the beginning scene in 2034 in chapter 1).
But the ending you chose still fit their characters well, and was very sweet.
An excellent read. I understand your need to forever improve your own skills, as a fellow (former I guess) writer. But this is already quite well done, and very interesting.
One question- why did Christine never go back? Did she feel it wasn’t worth it without her father, or did she simply not know how to?

Good luck on your future writings, and congratulations on your accomplishment of this ‘book’/story!

The plot thickens :) Loving the story and can't wait for more :)

Awe man I love time travel stories! Great job with this chapter

What? The plot thickens...what a twist! So Erik possesses the same watch as Christine...what are the odds? Loving the story and can't wait for more :)

This is actually incredibly amazing, can’t wait for the next update

(I had to post this review on chapter 19 because I had already reviewed 20 apparently lol)

Beautiful chapter, it’s not often I read about Erik wanting an actual house rather than his gloomy lair (though personally I wouldn’t mind having an underground house). This is quite a twist you presented as well! Can’t wait to find out what you have in store.

I’m glad to see the real chapter, I had though it was just an edit update. But what a sweet Erik/Christine interaction, and then what a twist! Daddy Daae is alive? I know there are quite a few differences in your universe but that was really unexpected, can’t wait to see where it goes. I like that Erik and Christine were honest with each other about their wants, and Christine’s empathy is what changed your version of Erik. The maturity of this Christine allows her to not rashly. The scene of Erik describing his dream life is so sad.

Her father! What a twist! I cannot take the suspense I need to know what happens next :O Loving the story and can't wait for more :D

You might have not noticed, but you reposted chapter 19