Finally I can go to bed and get some sleep! Reading this streight through takes a lot out of a person. I really loved it and thought it was great with all the twists and differences from other stories. Thanks for all the hard work, keep writing as you do a great job.

Overall this was basically entertaining, but it seemed to lose focus I suppose after the new york battle.

This story seems to have a weak focus overall. For instance, writing about Harry doing paperwork, then stupidly risking his health to do it real quick to make Fury happy, just isn't a particularly great topic. Also, he is independently wealthy. He should be able to work pretty much on his terms, since he doesn't actually need to be paid.

this Harry is just a very dumb boy

Great story, I had a lot of fun reading it!

"cover every base"? What "bases" have they gone over so that they "don't want to miss out on anything"? They're jumping directly to the plot without any investigation beyond scanning and finding nothing. Go to a McGonagall! Or a professional! Or a hospital! Or something!

Pretty good, I've enjoyed reading this!

I really loved this fanfic, I’m just a bit sad that there’s no “a few years later“ chapter

Great story. Thanks!

If Lily is harry's mom then why in the world did you change his eyes to blue? Did you seriously just change how he looks entirely just because you're hot for a younger Steve Rogers?

He's so unlikeable holy shit just a whiny bitch all the time omg wow he's annoying

Ugh what a brat acting like a fkin pathetic brat it's kind of pissing me off ohhh bohooo what a fag idk why he's so obsessed with James and Lily he never knew them

Still acting without reason

The actions of people in this story make no bloody sense.

I'm sorry, but the way you write the relationships between Hermione and... well, everyone are infuriating. She clearly treats people as no better than objects, and everyone in her life seems fine and dandy with it. I might be more accepting if this treatment were addressed, but as far as I can tell, it's written off as, "Oh, Hermione will be Hermione!"

Nah, that logic doesn't fly.