| Reviews for A witch' shinobi |
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   edwardilovebella chapter 7 . 6/19 I'm very upset that this last chapter. I love the story. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope you update soon, but no rush. |
| mallarieTwinkies chapter 7 . 5/3 amazing |
| TheeLoreMaster chapter 1 . 11/15/2019 I’m...I’m sorry. This looks like it might be good, but it’s just impossible to read. I’m getting so lost, just halfway through the first chapter. Seriously, EXPLAIN! Who are Hadrian and Setsuna? Are they OCs? Why are there OCs? How does Mika know about Kyuubi? Naruto doesn’t even know about Kyuubi! Or does he? It’s never mentioned that he does, much less how or why? And how is Mika in the Naruto world? She got sent there? By who? Hadrian and Setsuna? If so, how the fuck are they able to go between dimensions? And if they’re strong enough to go between dimensions, why don’t they just protect Mika? They would be strong enough to fend off any witch or wizard after all? And why are they only visible to Mika and Naruto? And how is Mika related to whichever one of them she’s related to? I want to read and like this story, but I feel like you’ve just cut massive chunks out! Please, HELP ME! |
| MedievalScribe-FormerClearEyes chapter 7 . 11/11/2019 While I like the humor and the satisfaction we get from these overpowered children trumping everyone's machinations, I feel they are too overpowered with knowledge and abilities making them seem out of character and without any character arc because, being from the future, the already went through it and now they are "fixing the past." Overall, good job on the writing. Pacing is a little rushed and plot is confusing. Too many characters to keep track of. I don't think I'll keep reading, but keep up the good work. |
| krzys2000 chapter 7 . 10/21/2019 Good chapter update soon ! |
| SPark681 chapter 7 . 10/15/2019 Hmm, damn loving this story can't wait till Naruto and Mika get their hands on Dumbledore have a feeling he isn't well-liked by those two anyways keep up the great work! |
| kayla1991270 chapter 7 . 10/14/2019 omg i love this story please update soon im laughing so hard at the funny parts and then getting serious at the ...well serious parts keep up the fantastic work |
| deathwearsblack chapter 7 . 10/13/2019 thank you for update. |
| Jostanos chapter 7 . 10/13/2019 *nods* There was indeed chaos, and Orochimaru was obliterated! Well (i)one(/i) of him was at least. How many more of that "Pedo sanin" there may be is currently unknown. |
| Ana Luisa chapter 7 . 10/13/2019 Hermoso bello precioso excelente muy bien |
| starhoney chapter 7 . 10/13/2019 Hmmmm interesting turn ate! Keep going and updating I'm loving it the craziness and chaos of this story HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH |
| Eugene DC Flores chapter 4 . 10/9/2019 Lmao you need add more taqg about this Author with little crossover of fate and filipino language! whatt?! |
| kayla1991270 chapter 6 . 10/8/2019 this is AWESOME please update soon cant wait for more |
| Ana Luisa chapter 6 . 10/8/2019 Hermoso precioso bello muy bien excelente |
| Ana Luisa chapter 5 . 10/8/2019 Precioso bello muy bien me fascinó me encantó |
