loved this so much!

2hens the next chap going to b uo

Truest amazing.

Holy shit this was amazing

I LOVE IT. PLEASE KEEP WRITING. YOUR FIVE IS THE BEST I'D EVER READ *.*

I love this story!

I am loving this! Five is my fav and him being a child and hurt oh I love it so much! I need more! -

I loved this so much and, though it works well to end here as a one-shot, id like to see how you’ll build up on this if you choose to do so.

Very well written, i could feel fives heartache!

Nice story- I personally just finished binge watching the show and Really needed some more content, but alas no season 2 or anything. So fanfic! Woo! Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this, and definitely believe that if they were not aiming for a TV-14 rating there would be a lot more cursing, such as this. it is certainly more believable in the situation they are facing along with their individual characterizations. (Five certainly would be cursing a hell of a lot more than what was shown, lol). Nice work though! You did a good job of portraying the characters and while I think some of the flow of the scenes and their transitions were a little bit muddled, it made sense that it was that way given that it was from Five's perspective, and at that point in time he was a bit out of sorts to be a completely accurate narrator. Thanks for posting, KaseyBeth!

Thaaaaaank you I loved this so muchhappy to find fanfiction for this so soon after the show just came out!

I like it, but language language lol. I need to start watching this show though. it sounds awesome from what you've said.