Reviews for The New Legend of CrystalLake |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I want more lol it was good but chapters got shorter and shorter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed so hard with ladies code hahH |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you bring up the fact jason and harry are american so mcusa |
![]() ![]() it' should say defeater of the dark lord not the defeated of the dark lord. |
![]() ![]() So looking forward to the next chapter |
![]() ![]() Awesome story |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. |
![]() ![]() A short but O.k update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that explains why Severus is Hermione's guardian. Also I just binged all 25 current chapters and I can say it's an interesting story, a bit ... unstable feels right, you should take notes as a way to remember plot points or something. It skips around a bit between chapters, from mood to entire plotlines. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You had said that Hermoine had made her cousin in france her magical guardian in a previous chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The entire previous chapter makes up the first half of this one. Also that logic at the end makes no sense. How would teaching help anyone search for their kid? |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahaha..."huff puff huff puff".. haven't laughed that much in a while |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even if Hayden DID reveal his true self to his FORMER family, he should ask/demand they tell him why do they ASSUME that now that they have 'found him' somehow changes ANYTHING? Hayden should demand that unless they think hes been living alone on the streets, hungry and in poverty, which is unlikely seeing what he looks like now, they DO realize that SOMEBODY might have been raising him all these years. That he now has SOMEBODY ELSE who he considers his parents and family now nore than them and might not want to leave them to go back to the Potters? Demand to know WHY they assume he will WILLINGLY leave whatever life and family he NOW has to come 'home' to the Potters, like the life he has lived WITHOUT them in it somehow no longer matters as far as THEY are concerned now that they have 'found him' and that he should what? Stop being the person he grew up to be WITHOUT them and become what THEY want him to be? |