well this sure looks very interesting dude,still you've did a really great job on this amourshipping chapter dude. as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

well this sure looks very interesting dude,still you've did a really great job on this amourshipping chapter dude. as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

Just a heads up that the following part of the Content guidelines is broken so far:

"The chapter system is not to be used as placeholder for non-story content such as author notes. You can add short author notes to the beginning or at the end of stories but never as individual chapters."

Please merge all chapters that are full of non-story content into a chapter within this story that has story content.

aw that is just sweet dude, also great work on this amourshipping chapter dude. as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

I have read a lot of FanFiction over the years, I've even read Chinese pokemon novels and believe me most of them are bad (Shitty) but this FanFiction somehow managed to be worst then almost anything I've read, I mean ash is arceus his family too and all of his Pokemon evolved just because he is a Arceus plus all the Pokemon he encountered came to him just because he is an Arceus, I would understand if you made Delia have a bigger part in the story by making a champion and not tell ash but the hole part about them being Arceus or part of Arceus is just stupid, plus him having a bunch of family pop out nowhere is also kind of weird(stupid) and they also said they were stalking him the hole time that's also weird.

A fresh restart is nice. But, have you thought ever thought of erasing the old version of the story and leave out the revised one on? Its just that it could confuesd some readers whether you're writing or renewing your story.

Are you sure you don't what to fix this chapter? I think you put a plot hole in there. you didn't quite explain clearly in this and your recent third chapter.

well that's kinda impressive dude, great idea on putting two episodes together into one, well done man. as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

well this chapter sure explains things, so great job on it man. as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

What? Not changing the Tauros this time?

well thank god that giovanni is no longer and annoyance, great job on this amourshipping, chapter dude. as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

well this seems interesting, looks like you've been quite busy here dude, great job on this amourshipping chapter dude, keep it up. as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

so when will ash do a pokemon performance

great chapter and I hope u keep this up and also the other stories

Come on, this scene from Dragon Ball Z Abridged explains power levels in a nutshell.

Vegeta: Wait a minute, something’s wrong. Back on your planet, the Namekian couldn’t even stand up to Nappa, and yet here he is fighting against Frieza in his second floor.
Gohan: What do you think happened?
Vegeta: Either Frieza hit so hard I’m in a delusional coma, or...
Krillin: Or what?
Vegeta: POWER LEVELS ARE BULLSHIT!